Thank you so much for your attention. I have this huge exam next week so hopefully I will be able to reply to you next Thursday.
Damian Vo (
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13:59, 20 June 2018 (UTC)reply
No worries, I have just been through exams myself so I am happy to give you that leeway. I will add some comments here soon, get them sorted as soon as you can (if it is going to be later than next Thursday, let me know). -
adamstom97 (
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22:32, 20 June 2018 (UTC)reply
Okay, I'm back. Sorry for the delay. After reading through the article, I think it is pretty good and there are only a few changes needed before I'll be happy to promote it to GA:
I would suggest adding a line to the lead about the production design required for the setting, around where you mention filming in Italy.
I think you put too much emphasis on awards in the lead, especially since there is a separate article dedicated to them. I think the amount of content regarding awards in the lead should be at least halved.
I just don't think it is necessary to mention their backgrounds in this way at all. The only time it becomes important is when they are celebrating Hanukkah and I don't think it will be confusing to anyone if that is brought up without their Jewishness being established earlier (similarly, it would not be strange to bring up a character celebrating Christmas even if it was not pre-established that they were Christian). -
adamstom97 (
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04:30, 2 July 2018 (UTC)reply
The current reference in the cast section for Mr. Perlman's full name should be formatted as a note separate from the actual references (see
Template:Refn).
I would recommend separating out the home media content from the release section to its own subsection, which is a pretty standard format for film articles.
Congratulations
Damian Vo, this is a good article and you have done well to respond to my concerns in such a timely matter. Sorry again for the delay in getting the review started. This review has now passed. -
adamstom97 (
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05:30, 2 July 2018 (UTC)reply