C. J. Chivers was nominated as a Social sciences and society good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (December 28, 2018). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated. |
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Reviewer: Balon Greyjoy ( talk · contribs) 19:03, 20 December 2018 (UTC)
I will be conducting the review for this article; I recently read The Gun and was impressed with Chivers' work. Balon Greyjoy ( talk) 19:03, 20 December 2018 (UTC)
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A main issue with this article is the imbalance of it's focus. There is a large section focusing on the awards that Chivers has received, and very little about his early life, military service, and personal life. Additionally, many events in Chivers' career aren't explained, as his work in 9 countries is summarized in a single sentence. There is additional information that can be found in the descriptions of the awards he receives, but information about the places he has gone belongs in a section describing his career. I'm going to hold off on detailed feedback for individual sectons in this article, as much of its content would change based upon my feedback. Please let me know if you have any questions or comments.
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19:19, 20 December 2018 (UTC)
As mentioned on the nomination template note, the nominator for this article has since been banned. Should another user decide to take up improving the article to continue the GA review, please leave a comment! Thanks! Balon Greyjoy ( talk) 13:24, 21 December 2018 (UTC)
As this page has not been improved at all, I will be failing this GA review. If a future editor decides to improve this article and renominate it, feel free to reach out! Balon Greyjoy ( talk) 21:26, 28 December 2018 (UTC)