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Reviewer: IDV ( talk · contribs) 22:56, 17 November 2016 (UTC)
I'll do this one - expect a review tomorrow or during the weekend.-- IDV talk 22:56, 17 November 2016 (UTC)
an in-game reference to Prompto's difficult childhood- We haven't introduced Prompto yet, so I would write "to the character Prompto's...."
alongside fellow spin-off title Kingsglaive: Final Fantasy XV- I would probably specify that this is a film and not another ONA
Opinions on the anime [...] were among the most watched videos- the ONA was what was among the most-watched, while this seems to say that reviews of the ONA were watched a lot
Brotherhood: Final Fantasy XV forms part of the "Final Fantasy XV Universe" (...) that includes Brotherhood- don't list Brotherhood twice
The concept was first proposed some time in 2014"some time" doesn't add anything to this
after his near-death experience- the use of "his" makes it sound like the reader is meant to know what event this is referring to. I would probably change it to "a near-death experience"
"Uncovered: Final Fantasy XV", a media event dedicated to the titleDoes "the title" refer to Brotherhood or XV?
The two formed a close bond,- does "the two" refer to Noctis and Iris or Noctis and Gladiolus?
beaten back - during- use – or — rather than -.
GamesRadar called the anime "surprisingly well-written and are well worth watching"- this doesn't work grammatically. I would probably write "called the episodes" or change "and are" to "[and]".
@ ProtoDrake: Looks good - I did find a few issues, listed above, but I don't think any of them should be very difficult to fix.-- IDV talk 16:37, 19 November 2016 (UTC)