Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for
GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.
If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)
I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.
Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski(
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Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.
Immediate Failures
It is a long way from meeting any one of the six good article criteria -
It contains copyright infringements -
It has, or needs, cleanup banners that are unquestionably still valid. These include{{cleanup}}, {{POV}}, {{unreferenced}} or large numbers of {{citation needed}}, {{clarify}}, or similar tags. (See also {{QF-tags}}). -
It is not stable due to edit warring on the page. -
He was best known for his tenure in WWE, where he performed under the ring name Luke Harper (later simply Harper) from 2012 to 2019 - "was" isn't right. It should still be is, it's not like we no longer think this way. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski(
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though his style and appearance have also brought comparisons to Bruiser Brody, mistakenly thinking his ring name was derived from Bruiser - who did this? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski(
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win multiple championships including the heavyweight championship on three separate occasions, the tag team championship once and the television championship once, which he also proceeded to unify with the Kayfabe Dojo Championship - I know what Kayfabe is... This wasn't surely the title of the championship? Also, did he unify the tag belts with a dojo championship? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski(
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According to the source N 10, Lee won the TV title and, days later, unified it with the Kayfabe Dojo Championship. I changed the text a little bit. Also, Kayfabe Dojo Championship is the name of the title. --
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Huber has described his original "The Right Stuff" gimmick as him "just having fun" and "being a cruiserweight" - he's a big guy, right? How would this make any sense if you didn't know that? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski(
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I think a link to booker it's necessary. It's the first time booker is mentioned and no-wrestling fans maybe don't know what a booker is and the power inside the promotion.--
HHH Pedrigree (
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more serious gimmick of a trucker. - if you don't know what a gimmick is, how are you supposed to know what you mean. I'm assuming you mean that the gimmick is more serious than the last one. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski(
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Lee and the Olsen Twins were scheduled to enter the 2008 King of Trios tournament as Team Dr. Keith, but after Colin signed a contract with World Wrestling Entertainment (WWE), the team was left one man short. A random draw picked Retail Dragon as his replacement, but after he dropped the deciding fall in their opening round match against Cheech, Cloudy and m.c.KZ, Lee turned on him while simultaneously ending his alliance with Jimmy Olsen in the process - this is a large portion not really discussing the subject, and could easily be condensed. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski(
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So the biggest issue in this article is it not being written in an encyclopedic way. Things are written as if the things happening in kayfabe are actual things that have happened, as if he was "bullying smaller wrestlers". It also struggles with
WP:proseline issues with a lot of sentences starting "on X date, Lee defeated Y", or "in late X year". The article should be a detailed summary of the subjects career, which doesn't seem to be what happened here. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski(
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For these reasons I'm failing the article. I did go through the rest of the article, but I just kept coming up with these issues and it's clear the prose isn't written to GA standard.