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The article incorrectly states that Stevens just surpassed Bob Knight for the youngest coach to lead a team to a Final Four. This is incorrect - Knight was 32 when he led Indiana to the Final Four in 1973, while Stevens is currently 33. I think the editor misread his source, which states that Knight was 35 when he won his first championship, not his first Final Four.
While I'm not sure if Knight was the youngest to do so when he took his 1973 team to the Final Four, this user is correct that Knight was younger than Stevens when he did it. That line has been removed from the article.
Ncjon (
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00:23, 28 March 2010 (UTC)reply
They were the first to go undefeated through both the regular season and conference tournament, as explained in the body of this article. The previous two teams to go undefeated through the regular season both lost during the conference tournament, which is part of league play. --
ThaddeusB (
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06:02, 8 April 2010 (UTC)reply
Edit request from Myersonrich, 3 April 2010
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Under his early life his father is spelled incorrectly. It is spelled "farther".
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"The Monk's court" should be "the Monks' court" or "Monk's court" (referring only to Stevens' friend).
"The hard work payed off" should be "The hard work paid off".
"named to the all-conference conference team three time" should be "named to the all-conference team three times" [two changes]
"academic all conference awards" should be "academic all-conference awards"
"a well paying job" should be "a well-paying job"
"working as a volunteer coaching assistant job" should be "working as a volunteer coaching assistant"
"had a meeting athletic director" should be "had a meeting with athletic director"
"Midway through Stevens first season" should be "Midway through Stevens' first season"
"composure of seasoned veteran" should be "composure of a seasoned veteran"
"as an at large selection" should be "as an at-large selection"
"33-26 half time lead and held the led" should be "33-26 half-time lead and held the lead"
"Joe Sexson lead the 1978 team" should be "Joe Sexson led the 1978 team"
"Steven's earned" should be "Stevens earned"
"Steven's Bulldogs beat" should be "Stevens' Bulldogs beat"
"Butler responded by Syracuse scoreless" should be "Butler responded by leaving Syracuse scoreless"
"out scoring Kansas State" should be "out-scoring Kansas State"
"before the Wildcats hit a meaning shot" should be "before the Wildcats hit a meaningless shot"
"a strategy of always remain calm" should be "a strategy of always remaining calm"
"to legendary coach John Wooden writing" should be "to legendary coach John Wooden, writing"
"He is also for projected a profession, "corporate" look from the sidelines" should be "He is also for known for projecting a professional, "corporate" look from the sidelines"
Sorry about that. I've written a large portion of the article over the last few days and hadn't had a chance to copy edit it throughly yet. Thanks for correctly my many errors. --
ThaddeusB (
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06:16, 4 April 2010 (UTC)reply
There is a tremendous amount of detail here on Butler's recent seasons—as opposed to Brad Stevens himself—that should be moved to
Butler Bulldogs men's basketball or to articles on the team's individual seasons (such as the one for
2009-2010). As a biography article this should, of course, mention these events, but only in very abbreviated form, with those who want more details going to the relevant articles.
YLee (
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00:37, 7 April 2010 (UTC)reply
It details these games in great detail, but they are the most important of his career. None the less, your suggestion is valid and I'll see what I can do. --
ThaddeusB (
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00:35, 8 April 2010 (UTC)reply
Crap, I totally forgot about this (I only saw it again by idly checking my raw watchlist). Sorry I haven't been by to post a review in the last nearly week. Will do so immediately.
Nosleep (
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04:32, 19 April 2010 (UTC)reply
This article is generally quite good. Some minor MOS issues - contractions are present in the article, and there's inconsistency in usage spelled-out numbers vs. numerals. Other minor issues that I'll be more able to articulate when it's not twenty to midnight. I will be back to this article tomorrow, I promise.
Nosleep (
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06:40, 19 April 2010 (UTC)reply
No worries about the "slow" review. I have corrected the contraction issue - the remaining ones are direct quotes. I'll address the numbering issue later today. I also have to make a slight factual correction in regards to the Hugh Durham award which I've been meaning to get to the last couple days. --
ThaddeusB (
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21:55, 19 April 2010 (UTC)reply
It needs a little tweaking, which I'll do myself. Stevens should not be referred to in the alt text of the first image, for example (it should say something like "a man in his early thirties wearing a suit jacket...."). Later in the article, when Stevens has been sufficiently described in the prose, he can be referred to directly.
Nosleep (
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03:09, 25 April 2010 (UTC)reply
Thank you very much for taking the time to write a thorough review. I have taken the vast majority of your suggestions, but I have questions/need to do some research on a few. My replies to each suggestion are inline below. --
ThaddeusB-public (
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16:49, 22 April 2010 (UTC)reply
In the postseason, Stevens coached Butler to the first Elite Eight and Final Four in school history. A bit redundant, isn't it? If they made the Final Four, obviously they made the Elite Eight, and no one builds a resume on how many Elite Eights they've made. I suspect this is probably a relic from when the article was being updated as Butler progressed through the tournament.
Yes, if they made the Final Four, they also made the Elite Eight. However, just because it was the first Final Four doesn't mean it was also the first Elite Eight. Thus it is two separate firsts. Perhaps it isn't that important and can be dropped, but it definitely two separate things.
It's true that their first Final Four isn't necessarily their first Elite Eight. If they had lost in the Elite Eight, first Elite Eight might bear mentioning, but I think it's stronger just to say Final Four. The Final Four is much more...I dunno, culturally significant than the Elite Eight.
His teams are exceptionally well prepared and quietly confident. Exceptionally? Is that sourced (somewhere)? Otherwise, it is not NPOV. Similarly with "tough" in the next sentence.
I have rephrased to stick closer to what the body says.
His father would drive him to Bloomington to watch Indiana Hoosiers games. I generally prefer the simple past to the conditional, though that's mostly a personal preference. The conditional sounds better when there's some kind of time reference in it - maybe His father would often drive him to Bloomington to watch Indiana Hoosiers games. Just a thought.
Added "often"
For his eighth birthday, Stevens received a brand new basketball hoop. "brand" seems like a dead wood word in this sentence (meaning it's just taking up space)
Of course "brand new" and "new" don't always mean the same thing, but in this case I agree.
Stevens had set school records for career scoring, assists, steals, and three-point field goals. As of 2010, three of those records still stand, including the scoring record. Surely it would be simpler to just say which records stand directly?
Agreed
averaged more than 8 points per game 3 of his 4 years "8 points" is debatable (countable quantities), but I'm pretty sure "3 of 4" should be "three of four"
I left 8 and change 3/4. Otherwise the next sentence ("His career highs were 24 points and 8 rebounds in a game.") would have to be rewritten 24 points and eight rebounds which just looks weird to me.
then long-time girlfriend Tracy Wilhelmy I think this hyphen is misplaced. "then" is a modifier, and "longtime" is an adjective itself.
fixed
The position had opened up after assistant coach Jamal Meeks resigned after being arrested on solicitation and drug charges. (He was later acquitted.) Clunky. ,of which he was later acquitted would seem to flow better.
OK
Collier was in complete agreement Wordy. Why not just Collier agreed ?
That whole sentence has always seemed awkward to me... I change it to "Collier, having spent the entire season observing the assistant coaches' interaction with the team, agreed." Does that work better?
Sure.
Butler was awarded the 7 seed in the East Regional. They beat tenth-seeded South Alabama 81–61 in the opening round Number usage certainly needs to be consistent when they're this close together. Also, the "opening round" is the play-in game. A 7/10 game occurs in the first round. There is a distinct difference.
I have changed all the seed numbers throughout the article to use words
and became the fourth winningest first year coach. "Winningest" ? Is that a word?
M-W lists it. The alternative: "forth most winning"(?) sounds worse, IMO. Perhaps a complete re-word would be best?
OK. It just stuck out like a sore thumb to me.
Butler was nationally ranked for a school and league record 19 consecutive weeks. Do those still stand? If not, that bears mentioning.
I'm pretty sure they were surpassed this year, but I'll have to double check on that. After further review, it appears they "only" tied the record this year. I have updated the article to state this. --
ThaddeusB (
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02:30, 25 April 2010 (UTC)reply
Looks good.
Stevens defied expectations, again winning the regular season Horizon championship with a 25–4 (15–3 in conference) record. This doesn't logically flow. The coach won the league championship?
Rephrased
Doc Meanwell did it in 51 games at Wisconsin. Clair Bee at Rider, Bill Carmody at Princeton, and Bill Guthridge at North Carolina all reached the mark in 55 games.[23] Buck Freeman also reached the milestone in his 56th game at St. John's Focused? And if this is to remain, wikilinking
Bill Guthridge twice is unnecessary.
I agree it was unnecessary and have dropped it entirely. The alternate would be simply to list the people w/o the number of games required.
And boy am I glad I've been intermediate saving....
Butler won its first three games, before heading to the 76 Classic for its first real test.[28] [28] is just a team schedule, so "its first real test" seems a little POV.
Changed to "for its first game against a ranked opponent"
twenty-second ranked Minnesota Another number/numeral oddity, especially as 10th in the Coaches' Poll and 11th in the AP Poll appears a bit earlier. Same for nineteenth ranked Clemson and then-thirteenth ranked Georgetown. I also don't really like then in that construction as these rankings are obviously referring to the rank at the time of the game.
I changed all the rankings to use numbers since that is the normal way it is done in news articles. I also removed the use of the word "then".
Three days after the Xavier game, the team lost for what would become the last time in the regular season "what would become" are more dead wood words. I'd just take them out entirely.
I think the different tense does change the feel slightly, but not much, so I took the words out.
Is
Indiana Collegiate Conference a likely future article? It's got a smattering of inbound links, but I'd like to make sure.
It definitely
should have an article (lasted 20+ years), but I have no idea how likely one will be written soon.
Okay.
I'm not really sure what's under the 2009-10 fits the "focused" criterion for GA.
My thinking is that his most of his notoriety stems from those 6 games in March, esp. the last 3. (The page views agree w/that assessment.) Some of the details can probably go, but I'd like to keep enough context to show how some of his decisions helped win the games. So, I can trim it some, but how much do you have in mind?
Understand, I'm not claiming undue weight here. Certainly, this deserves a lot of attention in the article, but paragraphs like The second half was played very closely, with neither team taking a lead larger than two points until a Brian Zoubek layup put Duke up 47–43 with 12:27 remaining. With 3:16 to play, Duke took a 60–55 lead on two made free throws by Nolan Smith. A Matt Howard layup made it a 60–57 game with 1:44 remaining. Smith missed a layup for Duke and Howard got another layup for Butler. After a Duke timeout, Kyle Singler missed an open jump shot with 36 seconds remaining, giving Butler a chance to retake the lead. However, Butler was unable to initiate their offense. Stevens called a timeout to setup a play, but the team was forced to call their last timeout when Gordon Hayward was unable to get the ball in-bounds. After the timeout, Hayward missed a baseline fade-away jumper and Zoubek came down with the rebound. Butler fouled Zoubek with less than 4 seconds remaining. He made the first foul shot and then intentionally missed the second. Hayward's desperation half-court shot court bounced off the backboard and then the rim, before missing by mere inches.[58] among others, have almost nothing to do with Stevens himself. They're about the team, and like I said, it's good information that would belong in (and I suspect is already present in)
2009–10 Butler Bulldogs men's basketball team, but frankly, if there's nothing citeable with regards to what Stevens himself did for most of the season/tournament/Final Four/title game, I could stand to see almost all of it go.
but is himself not interested in self promotion Redundant usages of "self"
dropped "himself"
Asked what his life would be like if he had never taken up coaching, he replies "If everything else remained the same, I would have been as happy as heck... Friends and family and faith, they're going to take the cake over all this stuff." Is Stevens religious? It isn't discussed anywhere in the article, but this quote suggests so.
I don't know really. He has spoken at churches a few times and makes occasional references to faith, but I haven't read anything concrete... I'll see what I can find. I haven't been able to find anything source-able about his religion. I suppose I could drop the second-half of the quote if you think it confuses things. --
ThaddeusB (
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02:30, 25 April 2010 (UTC)reply
I don't know if it confuses things, but it naturally raises the question of whether Stevens is religious. Someone's religious faith, or lack thereof, usually merits mentioning in a bio article if it's known.
I think I am going to add a few lines about the "celebrity attention" he has received recently. I also need to clarify the Hugh Durham award info. I'll post again after I do that and research the couple points from above that need clarification. --
ThaddeusB (
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21:00, 22 April 2010 (UTC)reply
I have addressed most of the your concerns now and added a few things. I have cut a couple sentences from the 2010 playoff games, but I await further guidance on this issue. See my explanation above as to why I included so much info on this area to begin with. --
ThaddeusB (
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02:30, 25 April 2010 (UTC)reply
I've cut another 2.5k from the 2009-10 season. Hopefully that gives it better focus. Let me know if it still needs some work, or if any other issues remain. Thanks,
ThaddeusB (
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19:07, 25 April 2010 (UTC)reply
Especially to make the varsity team at the age of 8!
"For his eighth birthday, Stevens received a new basketball. He would get up early to practice shooting at a local gym before school.[7] The hard work paid off as Stevens made the varsity team that same year.[7]"
Following "[7]" to the source article at the New York Times, the original line is:
"As a freshman at Zionsville High School, he got up early so he could work on his shot at a local gym."
Well, that's because this is Wikipedia. And as the rest of the Internet knows, Wikipedia is ruled by territorial autists ("editors"), such as yourself. As such, there's often no real point in fixing things, because of the incredibly high probability of getting into an edit/revert war, or having your edits reverted and then re-applied under someone else's name so they can "take credit" (who really cares?), or one of a multitude of other indignities not worth spending time on. So usually, the best course of action is to point out the issue, walk away, and hope for the best. Apparently, that's no longer a valid strategy, either, as you will just get called out for making "snarky" comments by, ironically, a snarky comment. --
Cogniac (
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19:46, 7 March 2013 (UTC)reply
Or you could have just fixed it. Can't imagine an edit war being started over an obvious oversight. Either way, it's done now.
Ncjon (
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01:42, 8 March 2013 (UTC)reply
FYI, this was actually from simple vandalism. Someone removed a large chunk of text between "For his eighth birthday, Stevens received a new basketball hoop." and "The hard work paid off". --
ThaddeusB (
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02:05, 25 March 2013 (UTC)reply
On consulting the source, I have changed the wording to "…ranking fourth in number of wins for first-year coaches…". --
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