"Several publications recognize Bomba Patch's impact and legacy in Brazil." - can this be expanded? What did people enjoy about the mods?
It's in the impact and legacy section. The sources praised the game for many different aspects, so I'm not sure how to summarize it without it being too long.
Skyshiftertalk00:47, 29 October 2023 (UTC)reply
"However, the uniform and shield were still the same" - should this not be 'emblem'? And I'd rephrase to However, the team's uniforms and emblems were left unaltered
"Jefferson also allowed participants in the championship to take the mod home" - you mean he gave away the mod's source code?
In the PS2 era this mod was usually sold as physical discs. The source also implies that (translated: One of these participants took a copy of Bomba Patch to a store in the city and exchanged it for another game).
Skyshiftertalk00:47, 29 October 2023 (UTC)reply
" One of them, however, took a copy of the mod to a store in the city, one of whose shopkeepers was in business with a large street market in another city" - this reads poorly and needs to be rephrased
There are a few prose issues, but I'll leave this on hold and will review it again once all of the above have been clarified. ♦
jaguar19:45, 28 October 2023 (UTC)reply
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Jaguar: thank you for reviewing the article! I've responded to everything so far. Indeed I am not very good with prose, but hopefully everything can be sorted out by the end of the review. I can also help clarify some Portuguese sources if needed.
Skyshiftertalk00:47, 29 October 2023 (UTC)reply