A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
I made some fixes to the prose, but you can revert them if you disagree. One more fix that I suggest: dropping "of them" in "While its predecessor used five keys, the IIDX controller had seven of them". I believe it is unnecessary.
Regarding layout, I have a problem with the two images used in "Development and release". They are occupying too much horizontal space in the section, and I am also questioning if the images are relevant to this specific section.
The Reception and legacy section should say something about the
Beatmania IIDX series that the game spawned. I also believe you should explain how the 4 Keys, 5 Keys, and 7 Keys modes work, even if self-explanatory.
I replaced Konami's Beatmania III page with a Hardcore Gaming 101 page about Beatmania III. I added a "cite video game" reference pointing to this Beatmania IIDX game, the new ref (the one using the
Cite video game template) should make the gameplay information easier to understand now; the Expert and Internet Rankings features are proven to exist by the new ref. The ""overall on beatmania IIDX" source is suitable for the "Development and release" section, I am certain it explains some information correctly. «=-
iaspostb□x+=»05:02, 7 October 2020 (UTC)reply