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How come the detail of the battle is missing?
This article also seems rather loose with its use of "right" and "wrong". Why was it "wrong" to attack Peleliu? It is failing to explain why it is regarded as wrong in retrospect. -- Brianyoumans 21:10, 19 December 2006 (UTC)
Teach me! I am japanese. AT Battle of Peleliu Wikipedia japanese version,"in 1982 japanese rebuilt Shinto Shrine on Peleliu and in 1994 on that stage they set epitaph with epigram which was composed by Admiral Nimitz [ [1]]" which was engraved followings
{Tourists from every country who visit this island should be told how courageous and patriotic were the Japanese soldiers who all died defending this island}
Admiral Nimitz composed that truly? I doubt it seem similar to Epitaph of Simonides Battle of Thermopylae. 59.139.180.26 14:46, 4 January 2007 (UTC)
Are casualties in the summary box correct? They do not seem to reflect all of the casualties listed in the text of the article.
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22:46, 9 July 2015 (UTC)Mark Rcca
This article is rather POV and definitely needs to be expanded in light of the abundant source material available. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.231.247.123 ( talk) 01:55, 5 October 2007 (UTC)
This article needs to be rewritten so that it flows. Halsey's recommendation goes in the middle somewhere, not in Aftermath. The sentence starting "To settle this dispute..." makes no sense because both commanders wanted to attack Peleliu. It's obviously addressing the Nimitz/MacArthur strategy difference, not Peleliu. And what was Nimitz going to Peleliu for, anyway?
Clearly, there's a need for a blow-by-blow account of the battle in between Background and Aftermath. I'm not the Peleliu expert, so I'll leave the task to someone else. Binksternet ( talk) 21:42, 20 November 2007 (UTC)
The article states that the heavy cruiser Columbus participated in the bombardment of the island. But the Wikipedia page for the ship states Columbus was not commissioned until June 1945... well after the battle. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Tradermort ( talk • contribs) 03:33, 27 February 2010 (UTC)
According to DANFS, Columbia (CL-56), a light cruiser, was present at Peleliu; also DANFS confirms that Columbus (CA-74) was commissioned after the battle. Naaman Brown ( talk) 01:39, 15 August 2010 (UTC)
The info to the picture with the two soliders, is sais that the participate in the mopping up operation on the 14th of SEPTEMBER, when the battle didn't begin until the 15th of September. I do not know the exact date so I leave thet to someone else, but I'm pretty sure it's not the 14th. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 213.65.78.219 ( talk) 15:38, 4 April 2011 (UTC)
The article says that the Umurbrogol contained some 500 limestone caves. Is limestone correct? Other sources say or imply that Umurbrogol was made of coral. Llezsoeg ( talk) 15:03, 5 August 2011 (UTC)
The Battle of Peleliu is discussed to great extent in the recently-published best seller book "Code Talker: The First and Only Memoir By One of the Original Navajo Code Talkers of WWII" by Chester Nez, who is the last surviving member of the original Navaho-speaking Code Talkers, and was present during most of the Battle of Peleliu. Perhaps this could be mentioned in the article. -- Saukkomies talk 13:25, 4 July 2013 (UTC)
Do we really need this section? I'm inclined to judge the cultural impact of the battle of Peleliu negligible, even if it features in a moderately popular video game. -- Yaush ( talk) 16:32, 4 March 2014 (UTC)
The Japanese commander is listed as "Kunio Nakagawa †", with no reference as to what the superscript ("†") is for - it does not reappear in the article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 108.234.112.12 ( talk) 22:33, 27 March 2015 (UTC)
If both strategies included the invasion of Peleliu, as stated, than these sentences seem irrelevant to the background of this battle:
The only reason to go into this here would be the differing rationales for this invasion, but those aren't even given! As it is, the matter of the U.S. strategy for the Pacific seems best left to articles about the broader theater of this war.
Taking away that broader material from the existing content would leave this:
Any reason why I shouldn't make this change?
- Zulu Kane ( talk) 22:29, 12 October 2015 (UTC)
References
New Documentaries 2015 Revisiting a Forgotten Battlefield - Peleliu Island (Full Documentary)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jgAU1demn6k — Preceding
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On the map there is a landing from the 323d Inf on October 15th . But it is nowhere in the article.
ThePro ( talk) 14:50, 15 September 2017 (UTC)
There is a dispute between me and Coltsfan on the number of American Military losses on both the Battle of Peleliu and the Second Battle of Guam articles, for convenience sake I will use just one talk page to settle both. I'm requesting some of the users that have edited these articles in the past or have written extensively on WWII battle articles in general to weigh in, so we can reach consensus, which admittedly should have been my first course of action: Nick-D, YahwehSaves, Fortunatestars, Nick.mon, Roddy the roadkill, Mike Peel, AntonyZ, TwinkleMore, and TimothyBlue, your thoughts would be appreciated.
Both figures of American casualties on Peleliu and Guam (before I revised them) came from the same source - "Pride and Patriotism: Stamford’s Role in World War II, Online Edition" by the The Stamford Historical Society. Each one linked to a separate webpage: this is the one for Peleliu [2], and this is the one for Guam [3]. As you can see, this isn't from a published work but rather from an exhibit, apparently held May 2006 through June 2007 about Stamford, Connecticut's role in WWII [4]. In and of itself I don't think this qualifies as a reliable source, but regardless it HEAVILY contradicts with the established published sources on this subject, especially in the case of Peleliu. On the Peleliu article I revised this using "The Battle of Peleliu" by Kimberly J. Miller, 1994 (backside/page 2) as a source and also (if we are using webpages) the Naval History and Heritage Command website [5], the former of these is a factsheet I own (but still a written published work, unlike the current source), and was meant to be temporary while I compiled the other sources since I've read in multiple other sources the same lower figure. This was immediately reverted by [User:The Banner|The Banner] without actually giving an explanation, which isn't acceptable. When I changed it back I was then reverted by Coltsfan, saying "you didn't use any source; just placed some 'title' and a page with no consequence. again, use the talk page and show a better source than 'that'" leaving aside the obvious problems I just mentioned with the source previously in use, I reverted this since I gave not one but two sources so that's an objectively false pretext, which he then acknowledges in the same sentence, but claims citing the books name and page number isn't acceptable (except there are multiple articles that do just that).
For starters the sources I replaced *themselves* had replaced the previous figures, which I have re-instated(although with different sources in the case of Guam), without any discussion on the talkpage of either articles, the reason given by The Pittsburgher being that the higher figure was "far more common" in the case of Peleliu [6](I can find no evidence for this), while for the Battle of Guam the revision in question not only wasn't discussed on the talkpage, there wasn't a reason given for it on the actual edit [7]. If there was no discussion on it to begin with and it was just accepted I want to ask why mine was unacceptable yet not the the ones in question being replaced? The original lower figures that I am in effect reinstating are these: in the case of Guam [8], which is a webpage, so I figured I would replace it with "Mighty Endeavor: The American Nation and World War II" by by Blaine T. Browne (published in 2019) page 194 and also "Guam 1941 & 1944: Loss and Reconquest" by Osprey Publishing page 163, although according to Coltfans, who reverted again while I'm writing this, I am supposed to include the ISBN and author name in edits, although I've seen sources cited with the title and page number before, so I apologize for possible technical errors, but the fundamental truth has not changed. In the case of Peleliu the evidence is overwhelmingly against the current figures: aside from the ones I've cited, "United States Naval Administration of the Trust Territory of the Pacific Islands" page 158 by the United States Navy Department, Naval Operations Office (published in 1957) gives the same figures I added, as does "With the Old Breed At Peleliu and Okinawa" by Eugene Sledge [9] and "Brotherhood of Heroes: The Marines at Peleliu, 1944 : the Bloodiest Battle of the Pacific War" by Bill Sloan [10] in the case of the Marine casualties specifically. - 199.102.136.186 ( talk) 13:16, 26 November 2020 (UTC)
I recently
MOS:DATEUNIFY audited this article with {{use mdy dates}}
, based on nearly-equal instances of mdy and dmy formats, and that per
MOS:DATERET, the article was mostly mdy throughout its editing history (including its first non-stub quality edits).
Supporting @ Thescrubbythug:'s position at Talk:Surrender of Japan, I think the article's date format should change to dmy. Looking to get consensus. — sbb ( talk) 22:40, 26 April 2021 (UTC)
Postwar statisticians calculated that it took US forces over 1500 rounds of ammunition to kill each Japanese defender and that, during the course of the battle, the Americans expended 13.32 million rounds of .30-calibre, 1.52 million rounds of .45-calibre, 693,657 rounds of .50-calibre bullets, 118,262 hand grenades, and approximately 150,000 mortar rounds.
How about, for curt constants X and Y:
Postwar statisticians calculated that it took US forces, in rough terms, X of this and Y of that.
I might add that overuse of "over" reeks of mouth-breathing PR flacks who misplaced their statistical breath mints, but it's so ubiquitous in our highly commercialized society that I've given up the cause, and secretly wear a nose pin under my covid mask. — MaxEnt 14:55, 20 November 2021 (UTC)
How is it possible that the infobox says US casualties were 7,900 when the text says that only the 1st Marine Division incurred over 6,500 losses and the 81st Infantry Division also suffered 3,300 casualties? And that's without counting any other land, sea or air units involved. Merrybrit ( talk) 00:31, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
I'm not seeing anything on the article talk page about the very recent removal of all OOB information from this article and the creation of a separate OOB page. For changes of this scope, it might be wise to discuss first. Intothat darkness 22:43, 25 August 2022 (UTC)
This article, like too many other writings on Peleliu, almost completely ignores the Army's role in taking the island. That's not to diminish the grit and bravery of the Marines who fought there, but after all the casualties inflicted by the Japanese, they could never have taken the island on their own. That's why the 81st Infantry was sent in to lend a hand. That's one of my pet peeves, since my father was in the 81st. 2602:FE43:0:332D:102:60C1:F1BB:650 ( talk) 12:58, 23 September 2022 (UTC)
The info box says the Japanese had about 10k troops, but also suffered over 20k deaths. 2601:140:8283:6560:3B71:2E06:364E:5D4A ( talk) 00:52, 24 October 2023 (UTC)