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I'll pass the article, but I feel that it can be improved in the following ways:

  1. Expand the lead. I feel that it barely meets the requirements for WP:LEAD, and there's enough content in the article to feed information for the lead.
  2. It could go through a copyedit, but I'm not sure if you're going to expand on the article to put it through A-class or not.

Otherwise, it seems fine! JonCatalán (Talk) 19:35, 16 January 2009 (UTC) reply