Slight inconsistency in the infobox with flag for Japanese commander and no flag in Allied column. Perhaps don't need either?
I think there might be a missing word here: " the area had been placed Australian administration in 1920 and had subsequently been renamed...".
Use of double negative here could probably be improved: "...it was not impassable particularly on foot..."
Repetitive wording here: "...terrain is less rugged than the Finisterre Range to the south and there are no especially high features, although the terrain..." ("the terrain").
Wording is a little clunky here: "...bypass Saidor following the Landing at Saidor by US troops...", suggest something like "...bypass Saidor following the landing there by US troops..."
"In the early stages of the pursuit, the Australians sent long range patrols..." hyphenate "long-range" (per my Macquarie Dictionary at least).
"11th Division's divisional carrier company..." perhaps wikilink carrier here to
Universal Carrier?
"...Several artillery rounds were fired..." I assume by the Japanese at the Australians? Perhaps clarify?
"...cracked inaccurately..." language seems a little too descriptive here for an encyclopedia entry.
"...since the fighting around Kokoda and Buna–Gona..." maybe add wikilinks here for the Kokoda Campaign and Battle of Buna-Gona?
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