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Reviewer: Ian Rose ( talk) 04:40, 15 January 2011 (UTC) reply

Staking my claim on what I'm sure will be another interesting account of Australian forces in action during the Cold War... Cheers, Ian Rose ( talk) 04:40, 15 January 2011 (UTC) reply

Finally got round to the detailed review...

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Aside from my usual copyedit, a few points...

Infobox -- Not sure of standard and not too fussed as long as you're consistent, but we have in Belligerents "United Nations" bolded with a colon, followed by a bulleted list, and then we have in Units Involved "27th Brit Com Bde" unbolded without a colon, followed by a bulleted list. Should be consistent and, personally, I think the latter (unbolded without a colon) works fine.

Yes that makes sense. Done. Anotherclown ( talk) 08:43, 4 February 2011 (UTC) reply

Clearance of the town

• The following morning the Australians remained in position, finding more than 150 North Korean dead within their defensive positions at daybreak. -- within whose defensive positions, the Australians' or the North Koreans'?

Done. Anotherclown ( talk) 08:43, 4 February 2011 (UTC) reply

• Meanwhile, aerial reconnaissance subsequently reported the presence of North Korean tanks to the west of Chongju. -- "meanwhile" inplies more-or-less simultaneously, while "subsequently" suggests afterwards; can't both be right so choose which is more appropriate and lose the other... ;-)

Done. Anotherclown ( talk) 08:43, 4 February 2011 (UTC) reply

• Appears inconsistent representation of numbers, for instance you have "10" and "12" early on, but then "thirty-six" later -- I assume you're trying to stick to the rule of spelling out single-digit numbers and using figures for anything bigger, so perhaps best check throughout to ensure consistency.

Done. Anotherclown ( talk) 08:43, 4 February 2011 (UTC) reply

• Do we know who fired the shells that wounded Green? As written it could be taken as enemy or friendly fire so if we know let's spell it out.

Done. Anotherclown ( talk) 08:43, 4 February 2011 (UTC) reply

Cool; I put "around dusk" back to the beginning of the sentence because at the end it sounded like a location, not a time... ;-) Cheers, Ian Rose ( talk) 09:07, 4 February 2011 (UTC) reply

Images -- all appear appropriately licensed.

Summary -- looks very good, mate, if you can just address the points above I'll be happy to pass. Cheers, Ian Rose ( talk) 11:11, 3 February 2011 (UTC) reply

Thanks again for your time and comments. Anotherclown ( talk) 08:43, 4 February 2011 (UTC) reply

Tks mate, passing as GA. Cheers, Ian Rose ( talk) 09:07, 4 February 2011 (UTC) reply