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Edit request on 20 January 2013

This page was obviously written by non-native English speaker, and includes numerous grammatical mistakes and awkward wording. Also, the addition of term "carnival" is necessary, since "fun fair" appears to be British.

Talkboutwhatyaknow ( talk) 18:18, 20 January 2013 (UTC) reply

Not done: please make your request in a "change X to Y" format. - Nathan Johnson ( talk) 22:50, 20 January 2013 (UTC) reply