"Geoffrey Rush, foundation and current President of AACTA" What do you mean by foundation? If you meant founder, I thought he was just named the president?
"...with the inaugural festival to be held in Sydney and Melbourne from October to November in 2011.[18]" Since they presumably already occurred, the tense needs to change.
"...members of the Academy can commence voting for films in all categories, while members of the Institute vote for the Best Short Animation and Best Short Fiction Film only.[19][20]" So members of the Institute only vote for those two categories? That seems odd
Use consistent publishers links (compare ref 5 to 7 for example)
Use consistent date formatting (2011-08-30 vs 19 August 2011 for example)
Not too many major issues here. Always happy to see an awards-related article be nominated to GA. I'll place the review on hold for seven days. Please respond here when you have finished with the corrections. Thanks! Ruby2010/201304:22, 15 December 2011 (UTC)reply
Thanks for your review! I have made the changes that you pointed out in your comments. In regards to the "...members of the Institute vote for the Best Short Animation and Best Short Fiction Film only" part, it seems to be just those categories that the AFI members can vote for. All other voting privileges appear to be only for Academy members. But I did see that there is a members' choice award that AFI members can vote for so I added that to the sentence. Thanks again!
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