"he was found himself playing with the arrow keys" - "was" appears to be a typo.
You could add the year of release after the mention of some games (for example, "Drop7 (2009)"), though I'll leave this up to you.
"Vollmer unveiled Close Castles in 2014." Is it possible to include the month of the unveiling?
Some very minor grammar/punctuation concerns (two of which are simply requests, not even requirements). It's great to see other articles about game developers nominated for GA (I've recently embarked on a
similar project). I'll leave this on hold until I receive a reply, but it shouldn't be long before this is passed. Really great work on this. --
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