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"on the rapper's YouTube," → "to the rapper's
YouTube," with the wikilink
"on October 14, 2019 and" → "on October 14, 2019, and"
Shouldn't the critics be identified as music critics?
"as well as praising its detailed" → "Others praised the detailed"
"of them deemed it superior to" → "of them saw an improvement from"
"first entry in the chart." → "first entry on the chart, as well as..." then adding the number 37 position reached in Lithuania, also the first entry part is not sourced in the body
Background and recording
Remove wikilink on JPEGMafia
Mention around the recording info that it finished in 2018 per Fact; mixing and mastering is separate
The short length and pop genre do not appear to be sourced
[34] should be solely at the end of the sentence after [20]
The guest vocals are unsourced and pipe Buzzy Lee to
Sasha Spielberg
"synth tune[34] and a" → "synth tune, and a"
"instrumental built with" → "instrumental built around"
Release and promotion
Quote box looks good!
"Prior to the album's release, JPEGMafia constantly labeled his new project" → "Prior to its release, JPEGMafia constantly labeled All My Heroes Are Cornballs"
"promoted his album" → "promoted the album" but where are the video series and listening sessions sourced?
Remove wikilink on Kenny Beats
Remove pipe on Buzzy Lee unless the previous section's guest vocals are removed
Remove wikilink on playlist and neither of these videos are sourced as being part of it
[‡ 3] should be after the next comma instead because it is used for the title too
Why is there no mention of when he announced the track list?
"released the first album single," → "released the album's
lead single" but you need a source confirming the date
"released on September 13." → "released on September 13, 2019."
"the second single," → "the second
single" with the pipe, but this date is not sourced
"for the album launch" → "for the album's launch"
You should mention that the album was released on the planned date and write out commercial info here, as anything in the lead has got to be cited in the body
"The album was supported by the JPEGMafia Type Tour through" → "All My Heroes Are Cornballs was supported by the JPEGMafia Type Tour, across"
"and the United States, from" → "and the US from" per
MOS:US
Make sure you add a non-primary source since the article can't pass with any tags
Remove the first sentence part about how critics described it and delete the redundant source too
[16][19][20][26][36] is too many refs together; remove [20] since that is later used in prose for the same thing
Remove the indicated part since that is not notable
Remove pipe on Pitchfork
"characterized JPEGMafia as" → "said JPEGMafia comes across as"
"writer" and an" → "writer", and an"
Shouldn't The Skinny review be further down since it is less positive than most?
The "monumental display of musical talent" quote is not sourced
"and uncompromising" and "a" → "and uncompromising", and "a"
"said that All My Heroes Are Cornballs is one of the best produced albums of the year," → "saw All My Heroes Are Cornballs as one of the best produced albums of 2019,"
On hold until all of the issues are fixed; hopefully you get to this soon since user contributions show you're not too active. --
K. Peake11:43, 4 November 2021 (UTC)reply