Keys won "Best R&B Video" for "If I Ain't Got You" at the 2004 MTV Video Music Awards and led Lenny Kravitz and Stevie Wonder in their version of Wonder's "Higher Ground" - not clear what this means
After returning from a three-week trip after almost suffering from a breakdown, she "hated" everything she wrote for the album and started again.[9] Starting in late 2006, Keys worked on her third studio album, As I Am, released in November 2007. In an interview with MTV in early 2007, she said about the album: "It's coming together incredibly. I am in love with this album. It's very fresh and new."[37] Rolling Stone magazine reported in December 2005 that Keys and her long-term songwriting partner, Kerry "Krucial" Brothers, would start working seriously on the album in the later half of 2006.[38] - paragraph needs to be in chronological order
The studio was designed by renowned studio architect John Storyk of WSDG, designer of Jimi Hendrix' Electric Lady Studios. Keys and Brothers are the co-founders of KrucialKeys Enterprises - this has an external link that needs to be in a footnote and not in body of article.
She joined Joss Stone and Jay-Z on the effort, who was approached by the presidential nominee according to The Times to record a track that will serve as a theme song for his campaign. - needs better wording
In general, there are some sections that talk about future plans but not= time frame is given to the reader to judge whether these events have already happened or not by early 2009.
This is a wonderful article. In this article using so many quotations makes sense because the wording is unique and contributes to the flavor of the article.
"She joined Joss Stone and Jay-Z on the effort, which will serve as a theme song for Obama's campaign": presumably only tense needs to be changed.--
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