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I will take this review. I am sorry for how long you've had to wait. I've reviewed 60+ other articles, including some long and complex ones, and will review this article against the 6
good article criteria. I'll read over this article and have a think, then start the review in 2-3 days. --
Tom (LT) (
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21:23, 11 April 2016 (UTC)reply
Assessment
Whilst I commend the editors who have put some effort into improving this article, it is not suitable for GA status. My concerns include:
A confusing structure that focuses more on Turkish control of Egypt and specific personalitie than Armenians in general, with no real introductory statements
Incorrect statements, such as there being no more Armenians in Egypt, which contradict other articles which say there are at least 11,000 (see
Albanians#Egypt)
Grammar and prose that need improving - especially paragraph structure
Lack of citations for several areas
I have rated this article "Start class" and encourage the nominator to edit it further, but it needs a fair amount of work before it is suitable for "good article" status. Yours, --
Tom (LT) (
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06:28, 17 April 2016 (UTC)reply