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Grammatically speaking, shouldn't it be Age and health concerns about Joe Biden? The word "of" suggests that these are his personal concerns. Also, there was an article Health of Donald Trump, so perhaps this should be titled Health of Joe Biden? Abductive ( reasoning) 09:15, 12 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Happy to change to either Health of Joe Biden or Age and health of Joe Biden after the AfD has completed. I think the title should mention age as that seems to be the main issue - this is different to Trump, where there is more speculation on physical/psychological health concerns on top of the age concerns. GnocchiFan ( talk) 11:50, 12 July 2024 (UTC) reply
Sure. Abductive ( reasoning) 12:08, 12 July 2024 (UTC) reply
I guess that grammatical bit is technically correct, however, while it does look as though he's not concerned himself, it seems like he ultimately is, even if he appears not to be, and I think it was intended and understood that "of" was meant in the sense of "having to do with". If you change it to "about", that could mean "age and concerns around Joe Biden", which could widen the scope of the conversation so as to make it less precise and accurate than you intend. Tyrekecorrea ( talk) 12:52, 12 July 2024 (UTC) reply
Yes, that “of” seems really weird… 86.31.178.164 ( talk) 19:59, 25 July 2024 (UTC) reply
Now that the AfD is over, I have moved this article. GnocchiFan ( talk) 20:24, 25 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Appropriate space for reference?

Hello, I just added a reference at the end of the article’s overview. Since there were no other references in that paragraph, I wondered if that was the right place for this reference. Before I added the reference, the information in the second paragraph was unsourced. 76.170.142.83 ( talk) 03:56, 18 July 2024 (UTC) reply