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""Adventure Time" is the name of an animated short created by Pendleton Ward, as well as the pilot to the Cartoon Network series Adventure Time." => ""Adventure Time" is an animated short created by Pendleton Ward, as well as the pilot to Cartoon Network series of the same name." --Khanassassin☪13:17, 27 August 2013 (UTC)reply
"as of April 2008 the pilot had almost 3,000,000 views." Perhaps I'm wrong, but can "as of" and "had" really go together? Doesn't sound right to me. --Khanassassin☪13:17, 27 August 2013 (UTC)reply
Plot
"...giving Pen a kiss, which he enjoys but greatly embarrasses him." => "...giving Pen a kiss; he enjoys, but is also greatly embarrassed." Something like that reads better, I think. --Khanassassin☪13:17, 27 August 2013 (UTC)reply
Characters
"One of the main protagonists of the short." Not a big issue, but since there's only two protagonists in the short/series, Pen/Finn and Jake, shouldn't you write "one of two main protagonists"? --Khanassassin☪13:17, 27 August 2013 (UTC)reply
Not a single issue, just a personal preference: "Supervising producer of Adventure Time" instead of "Adventure Time's supervising producer". Just think it sounds better. :) --Khanassassin☪13:17, 27 August 2013 (UTC)reply
"However, the network was not happy with this story, and specifically asked for an episode that contained the same elements..." "Elements" sort of doesn't fit in the "what made it so special" sentence, lol. Just write "things" or something. Or don't, again, it's just a personal preference. :) --Khanassassin☪13:17, 27 August 2013 (UTC)reply
You forgot a little of the "protagonists" thing, but it's cool, I fixed it. I give this articleof a notoriously overrated show (sorry)a Pass! :) Congrats, brotha. --Khanassassin☪14:58, 27 August 2013 (UTC)reply
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The result of the move request was: Move to
Adventure Time (short film). There's a clear consensus here that the previous title isn't kosher. Several options were suggested, and
Adventure Time (short film) was the best supported. While this disambiguator isn't specifically listed in the naming conventions, as
IJBall noted, this is not necessarily a reason to avoid it. Another popular option,
Adventure Time (film), is unavailable as it's already a redirect to a proposed film adaptation, and several participants here felt it would be confusing as a disambiguator anyway. Feel free to start a new RM if a better disambiguator is identified.
Cúchullaint/
c14:33, 3 December 2018 (UTC)reply
Oppose proposal as "pilot" is not a supported term per WP:NCTV. As IJBall said, "TV pilot" while not (yet) in the guide, has become a common practice for "TV pilot only series articles", however this article does not seem to be actually it even. As Netoholic pointed out in the linked discussion and as the article itself says, this seems to be a short film, so would support
Adventure Time (film) (there is no other film in the parent article, only a "maybe working on film" topic. --
Gonnym (
talk)
10:28, 17 November 2018 (UTC)reply
Just making it clear I Support
Adventure Time (film) and oppose any other option presented per woodensuperman. I don't see any reason for extended disambiguation because of a 2015 report about a movie being developed and which the article says On July 22, 2018, Muto noted that "an [Adventure Time] movie was never officially announced which makes it seem that it isn't even happening. Even if the film will eventually happen then the correct disambiguation will still be (2007 film) and not (short film). --
Gonnym (
talk)
22:13, 24 November 2018 (UTC)reply
There is/was talk of a bona fide Adventure Time film which is what I believe that link leads to. Also, imho, "film" conjures up a full-length movie, and this is only 7 minutes long. But that's just me.--Gen. Quon(Talk)15:32, 20 November 2018 (UTC)reply
Not being listed in a "naming convention" doesn't mean a disambiguator should never be used – that's what RM's are for: in an RM, consensus may determine that a "non-standard disambiguator" is actually the best choice in a specific circumstance. This may be one of those circumstances... --
IJBall (
contribs •
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15:26, 25 November 2018 (UTC)reply
I'm going to throw in the towel on this, and support move to
Adventure Time (short film), even though I agree with Gonnym that I don't think "short" is needed here. But this proposal is clearly an improvement over the previous two titles for this article. --
IJBall (
contribs •
talk)
16:08, 20 November 2018 (UTC)reply
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