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Please change "Khalid Sheikh Mohammad named her a courier and financier for al-Qaeda, and she was placed on the U.S. Federal Bureau of Investigations's Seeking Information – Terrorism list; she remains the only woman to have been featured on the list."
to "Khalid Sheikh Mohammad named her a courier and financier for al-Qaeda, and she was placed on the U.S. Federal Bureau of Investigations's Seeking Information – Terrorism list; she was the first woman to have been featured on the list."
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Reason for Changes: The Original sentences don't really make it obvious to the reader that Azzam was a foreign fighter which ideologically explains alot of Siddiqui's activities.
Change the first clause here:
"According to the Arab News Pakistan's President, Asif Ali Zardari, had personally requested Afghanistan's President Hamid Karzai return Dr. Aafia's children, including Ahmed (born 1996), to their family in Pakistan."
it should be changed to:
"According to Arab News, Pakistan's President Asif Ali Zardari, had personally requested Afghanistan's President Hamid Karzai return Dr. Aafia's children, including Ahmed (born 1996), to their family in Pakistan."
So, the removal of the extra "the", and moving the comma to the correct place.