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Reviewer: DannyMusicEditor ( talk · contribs) 21:57, 2 November 2022 (UTC)
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I probably shouldn't have taken this right before I started a new job, but I have been keeping tabs on it, I promise. I wanted to do some more deep diving before I made any official analysis, but this seems to have many of the same problems with source reliability Won does at first look. I would like to give this more grace, but I'm not sure if I have any choice. Assessing the job here is difficult, and I haven't finished that yet. I'll let you know when I've made a decision, plus any constructive criticism I can give. It's a shame, because this is generally very well written - one of the better EPs I've ever read on. dannymusiceditor oops 17:13, 16 November 2022 (UTC)
Alright, I've waited long enough. After some deliberation and conferring with a colleague, I cannot in good conscience pass this. If the sourcing in Won was found to be grossly unacceptable, I can't justify saying otherwise here, as much as I'd like to. It's a valiant effort, but much of this information isn't kept by anyone qualified to be cited on an encyclopedia. If this is what you're forcing yourself to dig up for sources, then you might have to begin asking yourself whether this topic is even notable enough for Wikipedia simply based on web sources. Print sources are most likely necessary.
I have compared the list of what was twice reviewed on Won and see serious overlap. Consequently, I'm not going to list them here. If you have questions about whether any particular additions or existing sources are acceptable and why, you are more than welcome to ask me and I will give you the best and most human answer I can.
In addition to the sourcing concerns, so many parts of this article go into far too much intricate detail. These I can list some of:
Side note: I personally would argue in favor of Punknews and Punk Planet, and in small doses even As Friends Rust's primary outlet. But not all this scraping of the barrel's bottom.
I'm sorry if I made you wait so long for something that might potentially read as harsh. I don't mean it that way, I'm just trying to explain why I made my decision and hopefully bring some advice and sense of direction toward what needs to be done for this article. Best of luck. dannymusiceditor oops 05:30, 28 December 2022 (UTC)