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Archive 1 - December 2005 - July 2007, covering the GA nomination and review and a peer review
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Equality
How could the word and concept be unknown to her when she was writing in the 1790s when the world was awash with revolutionary ideas of equality...
Revert of recent copyedit
I'm reverting a
recent copyedit as I think it's introduced some poorer prose, and perhaps some inaccuracies as well. Some examples:
"was a treatise": the lead is in the historical present, which is common for works since they still exist; even if this were to change it should be made consistent in the rest of the lead.
"an education commensurate with their position in society" -> "an education that was relevant and apppropriate with their position in society": commensurate is more concise and the new version doesn't mean the same thing. It should be "appropriate to", not "with", if we were to keep it, in any case.
"claiming" -> "the reason for this view was because she believed": loses concision and gains nothing in return.
"prompted" -> "encouraged": though the words can be synonyms, the former implies that the prompting came from Wollstonecraft's thoughts on the topic; the latter implies external encouragement.
"While Wollstonecraft does call for" -> "In the treatise, Wollstonecraft wrote about": there's no reason to cut "call for"; the book is a work intended to persuade. In addition the new version of that sentence weakens its rhetorical structure.
The resequencing done at the end of the lead is reasonable but I think needs another draft before the prose is quite ready.
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Reception section makes no mention of any efforts to ban the book. Was it banned or censored in less progressive nations in Asia and or the Middle East?
Crawiki (
talk)
11:42, 27 September 2020 (UTC)reply
I remain concerned about original research and editorializing in this entire suite of articles ... one example, I wonder about, "In the introduction to her foundational work on Wollstonecraft's thought, Barbara Taylor writes:" ... does Barbara Taylor cite her self as foundational? Or does Sapiro describe her work as "foundational"? If Sapiro does, the citation should be placed there. This sort of issue is throughout this work, and I wonder if careful readers will pick this up during TFA.
SandyGeorgia (
Talk)
22:53, 1 July 2022 (UTC)reply
Apologies haven't been able to be around.
Claudia L. Johnson's 2003 review on
jstor calls it the "best study to date" so foundational may have been justified. If she were writing today Awadewit would have needed to cite that statement. As it is, it was easy to remove. I missed the TFA day, but seems to have gone ok.
Victoria (
tk)
19:14, 5 July 2022 (UTC)reply