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14:52, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
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- Any reason not to link 59th Street and Fourth Avenue?
- "on June 22, 1915 as " comma after 1915.
Done
- "to be ADA-accessible between" see previous commentaries, you use ADA here before explaining to us what it means.
Done
- Ferry is noted in the infobox but not in the prose.
- "was also renovated" vs infobox which says that hasn't completed yet.
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Fixed
- "on July 1, 1907, and the PSC approved the plan" -> "on July 1, 1907, which approved the plan"
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Fixed
- " its Chief Engineer to" no need for caps (just check the 53rd St review to see if I miss anything!)
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Fixed
- "June 22, 1915 as" comma after 1915.
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Fixed
- "for $345,021" inflate (and round to 1,000s of bucks)
Done
- "$6,585" likewise.
Done
- "Bay Ridge—95th Street" to me that looks like an em-dash, should be an en-dash.
Done
- Non-breaking space between 55.2 and million. Check others.
Done
- "Street Level Exit/Entrance" -> Street level Exit/entrance.
Done
- Island platform is overlinked.
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Fixed
- "This part-time exit[33] is unstaffed" odd ref placement, move to end.
Done
- Explain HEET before using it.
- "between platforms.[35][30]" ref order.
Done
- "Notable places nearby" interesting, what makes them "notable" and what's "nearby"? I.e. what's the inclusion criteria for this?
- "one can see tunnel stub headings" not a travel guide. Write encyclopedically.
Done
- "150 feet and" convert.
Done
- " of some sort of space beyond" of a void beyond.
Done
- "Portions of what was to be two additional..." single sentence unreferenced para.
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Removed
- " canceled in 1925.[44][45][43]" ref order.
Done
- Spaced hyphen in ref 37 should be an en-dash.
Done
- Avoid SHOUTING in ref titles (I blame the NYT).
That's it, on hold as usual. Cheers.
The Rambling Man (
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19:23, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
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- Okeydokes, this is fine. You missed one (Street Level, Entrance/Exit) but I amended that myself. All is good. Literally.
The Rambling Man (
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09:19, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
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