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The link to the National Register Information System doesn't take me to anything related to 55 Central Park West. It should ideally be a direct link.
Citations should be placed per WP:CITE.
The lead states the building has "... unique architectural features ..." but this doesn't seem to be expanded upon in the main article. "...apart from most others..." doesn't make it unique.
"The exterior of the building is also somewhat non-traditional." but then it states color was being used widely in the 1920s. What would have been traditional?
I do think the Architecture section could be expanded somewhat, but that's a personal opinion
As the brick facade rises from the ground it changes shade from a deep purple to a yellow-white. Color was being widely used during the 1920s as a tool in architeture for overall effects.
These sentences seemed to cause some confusion but I think to much is being read into the second sentence. It does say color was widely used but doesn't say anything about shading, I think that's where the "non-traditional" comes from. Either way, unless we have another source we can't really say much more. I don't have any books on skyscraper architecture, only houses. I can see what they say about Art Deco and use of color though. —Preceding
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Priority 6
Funny
I never thought about this until now, and it's probably wholly inappropriate for a talk page, but I am not trying to impress anyone, so here goes:
In this case, 55 Central Park West was created by
IvoShandor.'
Your "reliable source" is anecdotal at best. Especially since the name is neither in quotes nor capitalized in the original article. I do not think that the name of this article is proper. --
Chancemichaels20:06, 9 July 2007 (UTC)Chancemichaelsreply
I think NY Magazine passes the test at WP:RS, as I said the only other name is the address that I can find. But smart ass comments like Wetman's above warrant smart ass responses.
IvoShandor02:29, 13 August 2007 (UTC)reply
GA review comments
Hello, here are my comments:
The link to the National Register Information System doesn't take me to anything related to 55 Central Park West. It should ideally be a direct link.
Minor point but why isn't this article correctly piped in the Ghostbusters template?
"considered to be mostly "second tier"...." cite this directly as it's a quote.
"One of the building's earliest notable resident was musician Rudy Vallee, whose salary of up to $20,000 per week afforded him posh surroundings." - needs citation, and "posh" isn't particularly encyclopaedic.
The lead states the building has "... unique architectural features ..." but this doesn't seem to be expanded upon in the main article. "...apart from most others..." doesn't make it unique.
The building should be referred to as 55 Central Park West in preference to the Ghostbusters Building.
"The exterior of the building is also somewhat non-traditional." but then it states color was being used widely in the 1920s. What would have been traditional?
"Shandor is said to have started his secret society, which performed rituals on the building's roof, as early as 1920.[6] The building at 55 Central Park West was not built until 1929.[2]" - flow these two sentences together.
Not too many comments - I do think the Architecture section could be expanded somewhat, but that's a personal opinion. I'll put the GA on hold for the moment.
The Rambling Man09:10, 22 August 2007 (UTC)reply
Just so you guys know, I don't think you do direct links to NRIS entries within the database, they just redirect you to the main page. If you need any help or clarification just ask on my talk.
IvoShandor07:10, 23 August 2007 (UTC)reply
In that case, some instruction would be required in the reference to allow a non-expert (e.g. me) to get to the information required which is used as reference material in this article.
The Rambling Man07:13, 23 August 2007 (UTC)reply
That database is pretty easy to use, and I think I remember seeing something around here that said in situations like that it is better to just link to the database anyway.
I'm having trouble using that database (and I'm a software engineer!) - can you tell me exactly what I need to do to get the information referenced in this article please?!
The Rambling Man07:57, 23 August 2007 (UTC)reply
OK, maybe it's not so easy to use.
This link will take you right to the query by name but that seems to be all the further I can get in. Just type Central Park West Historic District into the search box. There are
database instructions here, I will include those with the citation. I changed the link in the citation to point to the main page of the database, which makes it a bit easier to navigate.
IvoShandor08:06, 23 August 2007 (UTC)reply
Hmmm, not sure what the problem is. It doesn't always work right, especially at this hour, as it seems that it is an ongoing government project. But it worked for me just a few minutes ago. It should work, did you try clicking the "Location" search link on the NRIS main page? Maybe that will work. It is also possible that the listing date is included in the National Register of Historic Places nomination form, though they aren't always, especially with the older nominations. I can tell you that the information is accurate, and I wouldn't think something as trivial as the date of its National Register listing would be something that would often be challenged anyway, I just always cite everything inline, it's easier and less ambiguous anyway.
IvoShandor08:16, 23 August 2007 (UTC)reply
No joy, perhaps cross-Atlantic queries are not so reliable! You're probably right, the date of its NR listing probably wouldn't be challenged, but I'm of the opinion that if you have a citation, it should at the very least work or be capable of working given sufficient information..!
The Rambling Man08:20, 23 August 2007 (UTC)reply
(unindent)Me too, it usually works, at least here. I mean, it is run by the United States government, so it's not really surprising it doesn't work, but like I say it usually does. I will see if I can find a backup citation, or if it's in the National Register nomination form. I think the weekly update listings only go back to the mid 1990s online but maybe the New York State Historic Preservation Office has something around their webpage.
IvoShandor08:24, 23 August 2007 (UTC)reply
Another note: As the brick facade rises from the ground it changes shade from a deep purple to a yellow-white. Color was being widely used during the 1920s as a tool in architeture for overall effects.
These sentences seemed to cause some confusion but I think to much is being read into the second sentence. It does say color was widely used but doesn't say anything about shading, I think that's where the "non-traditional" comes from. Either way, unless we have another source we can't really say much more. I don't have any books on skyscraper architecture, only houses. I can see what they say about Art Deco and use of color though.
IvoShandor07:16, 23 August 2007 (UTC)reply
Okay, I'm going to fail the application for the moment, there are still a number of comments outstanding from the review and I'd like to see the architecture side of things expanded. If, as asserted in the lead, the building has several unique features this should be relatively simple. Also, there are some
WP:MOS issues, e.g. the citations are not all in the correct places - this can be solved easily. Hopefully the modifications can be made swiftly and the article can be renominated. Let me know if I can be of any further assistance.
The Rambling Man07:37, 29 August 2007 (UTC)reply
Thanks for all the feedback here Rambling Man, while I didn't nominate this article, I did write it, and intended to nominate it someday. Personally, I didn't think it was ready for GA, but someone nommed it, regardless it will make there one day, rest assured.
IvoShandor08:02, 29 August 2007 (UTC)reply