Captions aren't considered full sentences and generally don't require a full stop at their ends
What do you mean by county association? The WWI division appears to have drawn from multiple counties; did it have a formal association with one particular county that's not in the unit's article?
What I was trying to get at was that they didnt put (North Midland) in the middle of their title. I have reworded this sentence, do the changes work?
EnigmaMcmxc (
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15:06, 22 April 2021 (UTC)reply
However, the 46th Division's men were ill-equipped, lacked transportation, were spread out and were assigned to guard strategically important locations known as vulnerable points. awkward and needs a better transition from the previous sentence. Perhaps something about security duties considered more important than training?
Each one contested by the 114th Jäger Division, requiring ridges and hills to be captured. What are you trying to do here? Should it have been combined with the previous sentence?
Again faced by the 26th Panzer Division, the 46th fought another series of river-crossing actions, and through 20 November captured various hills and villages.[111] On 3 December, after several days of preparation, the division pushed across the Lamone (River!) and fought over the next four days to capture several villages held by the German 305th Infantry Division. I'd expect hills and villages to be captured as the division advanced. Important thing in these sentences is that it fought a series of actions against the 16th Panzer, and then a major battle against the 305th ID.--
Sturmvogel 66 (
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01:13, 21 April 2021 (UTC)reply
I have tweaked these sentences per your recommendation.