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I missed the entire session completely (it's my birthday, so I've been imbibing all weekend), but did the FIA change the 4+4 elimination procedure they used at the USGP? The table suggests a 5+3.. if it stayed 4+4, did Kvyat set a time in Q2? If Kvyat didn't set a time and it was 5+3, we ought to note this in the article.
Twirlypen (
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02:20, 9 November 2014 (UTC)reply
Anyone else notice that the lap times for this race were consistently and significantly quicker than the V8s of previous years? I know that the track was resurfaced and they used a softer tyre, but Nico's Q3 time was only one or two tenths off the all time lap record a decade ago when Ferrari had a 900hp V10.
Twirlypen (
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23:38, 10 November 2014 (UTC)reply
I would strongly recommend moving the information about Caterham and Manor missing the GP from the last into the first paragraph, to the information about the other constructors who are taking part.
Third paragraph: As far as I remember, 2015 already had the rule that the Q3 drivers needed to use their tyres used in Q2. This should be clarified.
Done
I cannot find the information about the fuel pressure in Massa's car in the source given. Also, the phrasing is weird, I have never heard the phrase "fuel pressure getting into a car".
As in earlier reviews, I again had problems sometimes finding out who is meant with pronouns. For instance, in the third paragraph, you mention Hamilton, Rosberg and Hülkenberg in one sentence and then the next begins with "He informed his team", leading me to question: Who??
Sixth paragraph: "(after being delayed by slower traffic)" - again it is not immidiately clear who was delayed. Maybe switch it around, ditch the parantheses and just write: "Hamilton pushed hard following Rosberg's pit stop but was delayed by slower traffic and therefore emerged narrowly behind his teammate after making his own stop"?
"Hamilton attacked but Rosberg" - I would rephrase: "Hamilton attacked Rosberg, who responded by...", which also resolves a repetition of "but" in the sentence.
"his life under rentless pressure" - I am sure that if Rosberg lived rent free in Monaco, his life would have less pressure. Relentless is probably the word you're searching for ;)
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Zwerg Nase: Thanks for the kind remark and again for reviewing the article. I have implemented the changes you have suggested and have made my own changes to some other parts of the article.
MWright96(talk)20:46, 12 January 2018 (UTC)reply