For the most part I was very impressed with this article. I just have one thing to point out:
"Rubens Barrichello was quicker than Honda team-mate Jenson Button in 15th. The Williams and Force India drivers qualified at the back of the grid, covering positions 16 to 20." This causes confusion to the reader; was Button 15th or in the bottom 5, since it seems to peg him as in neither? Tweak the sentences to reflect better.
Got it. How's "Rubens Barrichello, in 15th, was quicker than Honda team-mate Jenson Button in 17th. The Williams and Force India drivers qualified at the back of the grid, covering positions 16 to 20 with Button."? Apterygial05:35, 16 December 2008 (UTC)reply