The problems with lack of in-line citations in some sections, which led to GA-status being withdrawn at
WP:GAR appear to have been addressed. I will now carry out a more detailed review of this article.
Pyrotec (
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19:59, 28 September 2009 (UTC)reply
Yes. However, Ref 1, which is invoked 12 times, is a 41 page PDF file. A page number, or pages numbers, aught to be provided each time this reference is called. This might mean moving the reference as a whole into, say, a source page and then grouping the in-line citations into "clusters" of the same page or range of pages, such as NSTB pages 2-3, NSTB pages 25-27, etc.