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21:58, 23 April 2009 (UTC)
The article looks good, but I have a few concerns.
- The background section probably should also contain a brief summary of the lockout/strike of that season.
- I'm guessing the game was not aired on national television?
- "Then Angels starter Mark Langston, who the Mariners traded to Montreal for Randy Johnson in 1989,[4] fell apart in the seventh inning." I don't know if "fell apart" is the best choice of words.
- The lead could also be expanded. :) One more pargraph could do it fine.
- I have noticed that almost all of the references come from the Baseball Reference website. Would you be able to find some more newspaper or book sources?
Until my concerns have been addressed, I will place this article's GA nomination on hold. Please leave me a message on my talkpage if you have any questions, or if you have addressed my concerns. Thanks, and good luck! CarpetCrawler message me 19:17, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
I've done my best to address the concerns:
I hope I have addressed your concerns, and am hopeful that the GA will be passed. KuyaBriBri Talk 15:38, 28 April 2009 (UTC)