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Reviewer: Kosack ( talk · contribs) 13:05, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
I'll take this one on, review incoming.
Kosack (
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13:05, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
Lead
- Link kick-off.
Coventry City
- You're starting from scratch with links here really, so Coventry >
Coventry City.
- Done. — Amakuru ( talk) 14:02, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
- Link
FA Cup and
Third Division.
- Done. — Amakuru ( talk) 14:02, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
- "managed at the time by future Coventry manager Phil Neal", is this worth noting? If he had taken over following the final perhaps I would agree, but he wouldn't do so for another six years?
- I guess not. Removed. — Amakuru ( talk) 14:02, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
- Link George Curtis and perhaps note his managerial role for context?
- Done. — Amakuru ( talk) 14:02, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
- "The game was once again played on a frozen pitch and Coventry won the game", double use of game is a little repetitive.
- Second instance removed. — Amakuru ( talk) 14:02, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
- "this time Second Division at Stoke City" > at Second Division...?
- Done. — Amakuru ( talk) 14:02, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
- Link Sheffield Wednesday. I'm guessing this will progress to FAC, so neutral venue may be worth linking as well.
- Done both. — Amakuru ( talk) 14:02, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
Tottenham Hotspur
- Again, as the first mention outside the lead, Tottenham > Tottenham Hotspur.
- Done. — Amakuru ( talk) 14:06, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
- Link Fourth Division, may also be worth adding team or side afterwards to avoid a sea of blue.
- Done. — Amakuru ( talk) 14:06, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
- Link replay to
Replay (sports).
- Done. — Amakuru ( talk) 14:06, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
- "beat fellow Division One", until now you've used the First Division, Second Division, etc format. I'd try to maintain the same style to avoid any confusion.
- Done. — Amakuru ( talk) 14:06, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
- Link Watford.
- Done. — Amakuru ( talk) 14:06, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
Background
- Link Highfield Road.
- I've added a linked reference to this up in the "Route to the final" section. — Amakuru ( talk) 14:13, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
- Perhaps worth noting that the two singles were "commemorative songs for reaching the final" or something similar just to explain the relevance of them to people who may be unfamiliar to the tradition.
- Done. — Amakuru ( talk) 14:13, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
- Referee is linked here but is used in the Coventry Route to the Final section previously.
- Fixed. I've also linked it where it occurs in the lead. — Amakuru ( talk) 14:13, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
- Link captains.
- Done. — Amakuru ( talk) 14:13, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
- "in the starting elevn", typo.
- Fixed. — Amakuru ( talk) 14:13, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
First half
- Is there a need to bring Hotspur back here?
- The infobox has hot conditions, but here mentions warm conditions. I'd class them as being a bit different so perhaps worth fine tuning?
- "was blocked by Peake who pass to Ogrizovic", should that be whose?
- "was lofted by Kilcline", add full name and link for Kilcline here as it's the first time he's been mentioned.
- The article seems to vary uses of extra time and extra-time. Best to stick to one style.
Post-match
- First mention of Sillett outside the match details section. Worth including his full name and linking. Perhaps also list his position in the same way as Curtis also.
- "which, as of 2019, remains a club record", still so?
- Almost certainly, but the sources all seem to be 2019, I tried getting a BBC archive of the Spurs top scorers for last season but it kept redirecting back to the current page which isn't any use. Any thoughts?
The Rambling Man (
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13:44, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
- I have added 11v11 links to confirm that the record wasn't broken either this year or last year. — Amakuru ( talk) 14:21, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
- Almost certainly, but the sources all seem to be 2019, I tried getting a BBC archive of the Spurs top scorers for last season but it kept redirecting back to the current page which isn't any use. Any thoughts?
The Rambling Man (
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13:44, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
- Probably worth linking fanzine.
References
- Ref 4 uses 11v11.com while other uses all drop the .com. Not a major issue but probably worth lining up.
- Other than that, the refs seem very well formatted and a few random spot checks all come up good.
- Cool, thanks for checking. The Rambling Man ( Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 13:37, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
A very thorough and well written article. A few points above to look at, but nothing major. Placed on hold for now. Kosack ( talk) 13:29, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
- Amakuru some food for thought here while homeschooling! The Rambling Man ( Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 13:33, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
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Kosack I think between me and
Amakuru and some homsechooling, we're done. Cheers so much for the review.
The Rambling Man (
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14:53, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
- Looks good. Happy to promote. Kosack ( talk) 15:20, 12 January 2021 (UTC)