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Reviewer: Go Phightins! ( talk · contribs) 03:30, 17 October 2012 (UTC) I'll take a look in the coming days, but will start tomorrow, as I am too tired right now.
I'll just post some general thoughts as I go through.
Perhaps we could use a word other than "magnate"...I know what it means, but some might not. Entrepreneur, tycoon, I don't know.
The attendance figure seems a little out of place; though that could just be me.
I think there may be a little too much on the founding of the AAFC rather than just the Cleveland Browns founding.
What positions did the two reserves play?
Is there a reason that in the season table, some of the teams are linked and some aren't? Do the un-linked ones not have Wikipedia pages?
I'm not a big fan of the week four summary starting with the ticket prices, I feel like that should be at the end of the summary or in a separate section.
I know I've said this before, and I know it's hard, but honestly, some non-Piascik references would be nice. I understand they provide comprehensive coverage, but it just seems the more the merrier in terms of sources.
Well, as usual, you've invested the time and effort into getting this up to almost GA status, and I'm inclined to accept pending the slight modifications suggested above. Keep up the good work!
Congrats on another GA. Go Phightins ! 20:11, 18 October 2012 (UTC)