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"The second storm, known as the Jamaica hurricane" - who called it that? Ditto the other two. Unless they were actually called that, just pipe the link to something like
hurricane striking Jamaica or something
"This was the most hurricanes in a season since there were 8 hurricanes in 1893." --> "This marked the most hurricanes in a season since the total of eight in 1893." - this way it reads better
"Reanalysis also resulted in the eighth cyclone being downgraded from a Category 2 hurricane to a tropical storm" - how come you don't mention this in the section for TS 8?
"A tropical storm was first observed about 835 mi (1,345 km) northeast of Cayenne, French Guiana, early on August 6" - not sure if half of the readers have ever heard off French Guiana, and maybe 5% have heard of Cayenne. Isn't there a better location you could provide, that people would know better?
" In North Carolina, poor weather conditions in Kitty Hawk prevented the Wright brothers from flying their glider or assembling the untested airplane." - cool!
"Seventy telegraph lines were also damaged after a conduit flooded." --> "A flooded conduit damaged 70 telegraph lines." - cleaner