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23:08, 4 June 2017 (UTC)
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"Greater than 6 total" how do we know it was more than 6?
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23:08, 4 June 2017 (UTC)
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"Mind adding more impact to lead somehow? I know it's kinda hard with these sort of systems, but still, some specifics like maybe the tow injuries would be nice.
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"The origin of the 1827 North Carolina hurricane is unclear in the absence of reliable data across the Atlantic Ocean, but it is surmised the storm began as a classic Cape Verde hurricane." I'd plug a link into
Atlantic hurricane or
tropical cyclone basins in here.
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23:08, 4 June 2017 (UTC)
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"while other reports suggested that storm tides surpassed 10 feet (3.0 m) above normal levels" link to
storm surge .
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23:08, 4 June 2017 (UTC)
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"Outside the city, the hurricane widened the Masonboro Sound by at least 0.5 miles (0.80 km) and destroyed several of the accompanied saltworks. " link to
Masonboro Sound Historic District here.
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23:08, 4 June 2017 (UTC)
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"The cotton and tobacco crops did not fare so well" maintain a
NPOV here. So well to whom? I think you mean it suffered severe damage.
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23:08, 4 June 2017 (UTC)
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"A two-story building on Talbot Street in Norfolk had its second floor carried downwind," is this really worth noting?
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23:08, 4 June 2017 (UTC)
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"A brick building was destroyed, a team boat was sunk at its wharf," ditto.
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23:08, 4 June 2017 (UTC)
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"Heavy rainfall and gale-force winds were recorded within Connecticut, Massachusetts, and Cape Cod.[4]" something just doesn't sound right with "within". Maybe try "across"?
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23:08, 4 June 2017 (UTC)
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Mention the six deaths in the body somewhere.
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23:09, 4 June 2017 (UTC)
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