I will be honest. I do not read or understand Russian and so many of the references are beyond my understanding, but I am sure the stated references are fine.
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04:47, 12 January 2017 (UTC)reply
After this last readthrough, I did find one minor issue in the infobox. Please fix that and I'll finish my Review. (I did just now adjust the size of Koptsov's photo to be slightly smaller so it would blend in better with the surrounding text.)Shearonink (
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03:55, 14 January 2017 (UTC)reply
After doing another readthrough, the names of Mikhail Petrov & Vasily Koltsov need to be either listed in a column or divided by more spaces or maybe a comma...to a reader unfamiliar with these two men, the two names will probably seem to visually read as one person.
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03:55, 14 January 2017 (UTC)reply
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Kges1901: When I think I am almost done with a Review I always do a few more readthroughs to see if there's anything I have missed on previous passes though the material and after this last time I did find something... The Third Battle of Kharkov section has somewhat of an oddity in its timeline. The Battle is humming along and then in the last sentence "Koptsov himself was briefly captured on 2 March before dying of the severe wound he had received on 28 February." I think the narrative of what happened during the Battle would be improved if Koptsov's injury was introduced earlier in the paragraph. It just struck me this time... I wondered if he continued to command, if someone else received a battlefield promotion, if conditions were so chaotic that no one was available... anyway, if possible, maybe the reader should be introduced to the injury earlier. If you think this is something that doesn't need to be adjusted, then let's discuss it.
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04:34, 15 January 2017 (UTC)reply