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Tintor2: I've looked through this article. As it stands at the moment, it's fairly close to a pass. It's well researched, comprehensive without being bloated, and stays on topic. There are some points that stood out to me.
Image description of cover art box doesn't match up with categories, and there's no source.
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Is there a better source for the cast image than TV Tropes? Is that actually where it's from, or was it cooped from somewhere else by them as an illustration?
Replaced image. For some reason, the original image was removed.
In the lead, the term "game within a game" is only used once, and there doesn't appear to be any overt commentary on the usage of this phrase, let alone another place where it's used in quotes.
Done.
In "Gameplay", there should be a mention of the game's true genre as well as its fictional genre.
Done. Action RPG
In "Gameplay", the last sentence of the second paragraph is uncited.
I fixed the footnotes (you missed a set of "}}" template brackets). I updated the image fair use rationales and uploaded a cleaner version of the character image. Thanks for the review,
ProtoDrake! I think we covered all these points.
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