05:0705:07, 16 April 2021diffhist−132
Nupedia
This sounds like an advertisement after the opening. Someone with more experience should revamp possibly highlighting the overlap/competition with Wikipedia in an abbreviated fashion in the first paragraph, but then just making the rest of the article about the path the site took after that).Tag: Reverted
03:4503:45, 23 April 2020diffhist0
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Ira Einhorn
I think it is more relevant that he was convicted of murder than what he touted trying to distract from that very point.
06:2706:27, 9 July 2015diffhist−79
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WSFJ-TV
repetitive (exact phrase is repeated twice in a row), probably missed because of ref usage.
5 January 2015
16:0816:08, 5 January 2015diffhist+78
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Jim Jordan
Removed dead link to progressive punch (also could not find anywhere on archive.org. If this statement is true, perhaps replace it with a different reference or omit it (may be slanted anyways).
16:0316:03, 5 January 2015diffhist−179
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Jim Jordan
Removed dead link to progressive punch (also could not find anywhere on archive.org. If this statement is true, perhaps replace it with a different reference or omit it (may be slanted anyways).
30 December 2014
10:0610:06, 30 December 2014diffhist0
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English alphabet
Moved a word in the sentence referencing the order of numbers and usage of ampersand, the previous wording could seem to indicate the ampersand should come very first, before the letter "A"
20:0120:01, 26 December 2014diffhist0
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Switchblade
edited sentence for Netherlands to add punctuation and conjunction to clarify reading (it took 4 reads to understand the meaning of the original sentence), also edited quotation marks for New Zealand per:grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/quotation.htm
19:4819:48, 26 December 2014diffhist+5
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Switchblade
edited sentence for Netherlands to add punctuation and conjunction to clarify reading (it took 3 or 4 reads to understand the exact meaning of the original sentence)
14:4314:43, 13 January 2011diffhist0
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Diclofenac
minor change to bolding on word assembly (the letters "ac" from the start of "acid", not the "ac" from the middle of the word "phenylacetic" should be bolded)