13:3013:30, 19 May 2011diffhist+1,102
Packard V-1650 Merlin
I tried to add the called-for improvement to the lead section to provide an accessible overview--particularly emphasizing why the Packard V-1650 was historicall important.
03:3503:35, 26 March 2010diffhist+377
Derek Jeter
Added "runs scored" totals to years where necessary, since this is a key Jeter stat. Mentioned that 1998 team is considered an all-time great. A couple of other small fixes.
02:1902:19, 9 March 2010diffhist+120
Robin Yount
Describing Yount as a "better-than-average" hitter seemed too weak; I also added more stats to demonstrate his career hitting performance.
00:1600:16, 17 February 2010diffhist−21
Pete LaCock
"and adult film actor" appears to be a malicious joke based on the subject's name. No mention of him in adult films appears in imdb.com