06:4306:43, 26 May 2013diffhist0
Shakuntala Devi
updated birth date in side-bar to show correct age. http://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-2312987/Human-dies-Shakuntala-Devi-Indian-maths-genius-dead-83.html
04:2804:28, 28 January 2013diffhist−254
Shaun White
specific riding details are not important enough to go in the first paragraph. This should be in the sidebar or something.
05:4105:41, 15 May 2012diffhist−45
Minecraft
the fact that it's written in java doesn't belong in the first sentence. It's irrelevant to an immediate understanding of the topic.
04:0204:02, 21 August 2010diffhist−2
Kesha
"concedes" has a inappropriate conotation here and requires a buildup to really make sense. changed to "stated"
18:2418:24, 1 July 2010diffhist−881
Haml
After trying to clean up some of the disadvantages listed, it became clear that they were all unsourced and contentious and should be removed. Documented criticisms would be appropriate
00:3300:33, 12 June 2010diffhist−69
Nickelback
removed statement that was likely self-contradictory with no citation to check for correctness. Probably meant "didn't enter charts" but can't tell.
04:1204:12, 8 December 2009diffhist0
Long ton
sanitized some of the conversions to read better. per talk page comment from 7 mo ago and common sentiments
00:2100:21, 10 February 2009diffhist+4
Perfect number
modified phrasing to reduce mis-read due to multiple meanings of the word "even" - as in "even when something happens, something else happens" vs "2 is an even number"