A user with 19 edits. Account created on 4 June 2007.
25 July 2023
18:2118:21, 25 July 2023diffhist+7
Bachman–Turner Overdrive
The text as entered could be read to mean that Fred Turner was also one of the brothers (perhaps a half-brother from a different father). I do not *believe* this is the case. My edit was intended to make it clear that he was not one of the brothers but was still a founding member. I would welcome more elegant ways of making this clear!Tag: Visual edit
18:1918:19, 4 January 2020diffhist−15
Randy Shilts
Previous sentence construction appeared to imply that he came out as “a gay undergraduate” instead instead of coming out as gay *while* an undergraduate.Tags: Mobile editMobile app editiOS app edit