17:2917:29, 1 January 2024diffhist−32
Jewish ethnic divisions
→Diaspora: Removed (Controversially) If it is controversial it is better to say by who and how than just claiming it is controversial which can be interpreted in many ways. Removed 'Recently' because it's dated anyway and 'recently' always feels vague.Tag: Visual edit
21:4921:49, 12 December 2023diffhist−8
Evgeny Morozov
→Thought: I do not see personally that this view is 'popular' is self-evident, and I do not think the citation claims this either. I think it is better and more neutral language to simply say 'the view' rather 'the popular view'.Tag: Visual edit
19:2219:22, 7 December 2023diffhist−44
Gadi Eisenkot
First and Second Intifada were neither battles nor wars, I think the best description would be 'occupation enforcement', which I think would denote a kind of policing action, not a military, which i think is what battle-war implies. one would not call the quelling of internal riot a war or battle in the military sense, for example. Forgive me if i'm wrong here.Tag: Visual edit
19:1919:19, 7 December 2023diffhist+595
Gadi Eisenkot
Very roughly fixed up some of the citations into the newer type here and a few other things.... I have no intention of reading the reams of nonsense beurocracy relating to Biographies but i am intuitively almost certain we should not be extensively - if at all - citing the subject of the Biography... Call me crazy..Tag: Visual edit
23:2123:21, 2 December 2023diffhist−1,127
Ofer Cassif
→References: Removed the Israeli language article in favour of the identical english language. Pretty confused at this article because i find the topics 'Biography/academic career/political career' to be pretty weird as these things tend to heavily intertwine. I guess i'll leave it for others.Tag: Visual edit
20:3320:33, 2 December 2023diffhist−102
Ofer Cassif
Usually i would not think it's great to start every line with this kind of 'on 8th of Oct' dating as to what was previously here but i think it being the day after the 7th being significant to the statements and the reaction of the Knesset Ethnics committee. Also added Cassif's response to the decision as per the orig citation.Tag: Visual edit
23:3123:31, 29 November 2023diffhist−254
Osama Hamdan
→Hamas representative: citations 4 and 5 was the same thing but also it's a dead link, i changed it to an archive link of the transcript. Having said that MEMRI is a unreliable actor on this issue, a better source should be found and if not this should be removed.Tag: Visual edit