21:1321:13, 7 December 2023diffhist+42
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Bellum Jugurthinum
→top: Synopsis covers only until ch. 40. Create a placeholder for the rest, ch. 41 to 114, so an unsuspecting reader won't think she gotten the whole story when it sure isn't.Tags: Mobile editMobile app editAndroid app edit
21:3321:33, 5 December 2023diffhist+2
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Jugurthine War
→Metellus: Improve the language slightly. The next sentence or two could use some more adjustments, but we'll leave it at this for now.Tags: Mobile editMobile app editAndroid app edit
21:1521:15, 5 December 2023diffhist+5
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Jugurthine War
→Jugurtha and Numidia: Who knows, maybe using "after" as an adverb is acceptable to some folks in colloquial speech. But for the rest of us, and especially in literary registers, "after" is a preposition. The adverb is "thereafter."Tags: Mobile editMobile app editAndroid app edit
02:5702:57, 18 November 2023diffhist+2
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Rail transport
→Infrastructure: Make the point much clearer by putting the main idea not in the middle of the sentence but at the end of the sentence. English-language readers are conditioned to expect sentences to read that way.Tags: Mobile editMobile app editAndroid app edit