15:2515:25, 16 May 2007diffhist−238
Rhetoric (Aristotle)
fixing reference to proper references to the work are to "the Rhetoric" or to "Aristotle's Rhetoric"-- never to just "Rhetoric"; clarify rel btwn P & Ar's work to make text factually correct ~~~~
15:1015:10, 16 May 2007diffhist−341
Rhetoric (Aristotle)
shifting lead to be more easily readable by a general lay reader (which is the audience of a general encylopedia)--"oratorical"as a term is too limiting in scope and thus not accurate~~~~