A user with 38 edits. Account created on 5 September 2020.
20 June 2021
- 19:50 19:50, 20 June 2021 diff hist −22 List of fatalities at the Indianapolis Motor Speedway Fixed bizarre grammar, removed invented word
- 19:44 19:44, 20 June 2021 diff hist −84 List of driver deaths in motorsport fixed grammar errors, improved tone
- 12:19 12:19, 20 June 2021 diff hist −81 Jordan 194 edits for neutrality and clarity
- 11:44 11:44, 20 June 2021 diff hist −11 1985 Formula One World Championship weird and unnecessary
- 11:41 11:41, 20 June 2021 diff hist −2,479 1985 Formula One World Championship →Race by race: lots of grammar errors, unencyclopaedic tone, generally poor writing
- 10:50 10:50, 20 June 2021 diff hist −2,567 1985 Formula One World Championship →Summary: text was extremely low quality, nowhere near encyclopaedic in tone. made many improvements
- 10:11 10:11, 20 June 2021 diff hist +5 Keke Rosberg →Helmet: fixed really basic writing errors
- 10:01 10:01, 20 June 2021 diff hist +11 1983 Formula One World Championship →Non-championship race: clearer
- 09:59 09:59, 20 June 2021 diff hist −84 1983 Formula One World Championship →Race 15: South Africa: tone and grammar
- 09:51 09:51, 20 June 2021 diff hist −68 1983 Formula One World Championship →Race 14: Europe (Brands Hatch, UK): tone
- 09:41 09:41, 20 June 2021 diff hist −184 1983 Formula One World Championship →Race 12: Netherlands: improved tone
- 09:38 09:38, 20 June 2021 diff hist −153 1983 Formula One World Championship →Race 11: Austria: improved tone
- 09:36 09:36, 20 June 2021 diff hist +20 m 1983 Formula One World Championship →Race 9: Britain: link
- 09:36 09:36, 20 June 2021 diff hist −106 1983 Formula One World Championship →Race 9: Britain: trimmed, improved tone
- 09:32 09:32, 20 June 2021 diff hist −307 1983 Formula One World Championship →Race 7: Detroit: trimmed bloated and unencyclopaedic writing
- 09:27 09:27, 20 June 2021 diff hist −1,435 1983 Formula One World Championship →Early season: trimmed bloated, non-neutral, unencyclopaedic race descriptions
19 June 2021
- 22:41 22:41, 19 June 2021 diff hist −11 Wexler v. Goodman →Production: subjective, does not convey any actual information
- 17:02 17:02, 19 June 2021 diff hist +41 Pinwheel Galaxy →Discovery: fixed grammar errors, and the writing error of referring to a single object repeatedly by different designations
- 16:54 16:54, 19 June 2021 diff hist −661 NGC 6946 →Supernovae: Quality of English was appalling, and numerous factual errors appear to have arisen from gross misunderstandings of references. Some text read as if copied from elsewhere. Fixed all these issues.
- 16:09 16:09, 19 June 2021 diff hist −63 NGC 6946 meaningless to non-astronomers
- 16:08 16:08, 19 June 2021 diff hist −10 NGC 6946 removed one unofficial designation, presented other more appropriately
- 13:05 13:05, 19 June 2021 diff hist −1,849 List of motor racing circuits by FIA grade article does not need to start with a restatement of the title
- 04:34 04:34, 19 June 2021 diff hist −13 Oasis of the Seas not a useful link
- 04:33 04:33, 19 June 2021 diff hist −82 Uniworld →MSC Opera collision: not a citation, not useful
- 04:32 04:32, 19 June 2021 diff hist −313 Uniworld →MSC Opera collision: irrelevant
- 04:32 04:32, 19 June 2021 diff hist −26 Uniworld →MSC Opera allision: no need for obscure terminology. use normal English words
- 04:30 04:30, 19 June 2021 diff hist +1 Celebrity Infinity normal English
- 04:30 04:30, 19 June 2021 diff hist −42 MSC Grandiosa →Operational career: more concise and in more normal English
- 04:28 04:28, 19 June 2021 diff hist −3 2019 Reed Bank incident →Joint Philippine Coast Guard - Maritime Industry Authority investigation: write in normal English
- 04:27 04:27, 19 June 2021 diff hist −28 m Buffalo Automation →History
- 04:26 04:26, 19 June 2021 diff hist −89 Buffalo Automation neither parenthesis nor link were useful
17 June 2021
- 21:32 21:32, 17 June 2021 diff hist −47 Water speed record →Current projects
- 21:32 21:32, 17 June 2021 diff hist −43 Water speed record →1980s: improved awful writing - pointless repetitions of surnames, undefined acronyms, unattributed "speculation", poor grammar.
- 19:51 19:51, 17 June 2021 diff hist −1 Portus Cale write in idiomatic English
- 19:47 19:47, 17 June 2021 diff hist −20 m Portugal →Etymology
- 05:50 05:50, 17 June 2021 diff hist +36 Steven Michael Quezada define acronyms
- 05:49 05:49, 17 June 2021 diff hist +78 The Guy for This define acronyms
- 05:04 05:04, 17 June 2021 diff hist −66 2012 London mayoral election removed weird repetitions from lead, made bold text consistent with article title
