01:5701:57, 11 July 2022diffhist+19
Arsenic and Old Lace (play)
→Plot: For clarity and consistency, I added the first names of Teddy Brewster and Jonathan Brewster to the sentence that introduces them. Previously, Jonathan's name first appeared in the sentence beginning with "Throughout the play, Jonathan is plotting to kill his brother". I found this confusing without Jonathan having been named previously.