23:3223:32, 11 July 2024diffhist−1,270
Louis Delamare
→Murder: First WaPost ref did not write about Delamare. Then gunmen came by BMW but then runaway with motorbikes? 🤷 Sources don't corroborate that, nor the checkpoint. Red Knights: sources don't corroborate that - whole part removed. Syria is somewhat implied, but not specified.currentTags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
13:1313:13, 6 July 2024diffhist−272
2023–2024 Georgian protests
→Political context: it doesn't have to be super chronological (we also group EP resolutions together non-chronological). Better to group the People Power formation in one paragraph - makes for more smooth reading - this text serves to provide the context prior to the protests - not a super fixed timeline. Also, we don't need every statement of PP - the point is already very clear: they are highly anti-west and see Georgian oppo parties and ngos as foreign agents
22:0522:05, 5 July 2024diffhist−3,988
2023–2024 Georgian protests
→Political context: Breaking long blocks in smaller chunks for readability // more to the point // the whole saakashvili saga is interesting but too much background detailing on why and how he returned and got in prison distracts largely from the story here and is not relevant at this place - point is his detention and treatment caused friction and calls for his release - the rest doesn't matter in so many words
07:1807:18, 22 June 2024diffhist−2,104
2023–2024 Georgian protests
POV: The authors of these references (essentially twice the same article) are extremely slanted/biassed and these are rather opinion pieces slanted towards a political point and not objective.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit