20:2520:25, 20 August 2016diffhist+22
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Lance Parker
→Professional: 1st sentence: spelled out “Major League Soccer” the first time it’s used. (Abbreviation “MLS” hadn’t been previously defined in this article.) 2nd sentence: corrected typo “MSL” to “MLS"
21:3921:39, 23 June 2015diffhist+255
Falcon Entertainment
→Notable performers: Added pseudonyms for Marcus Mojo; added Jeff Hammond, Jim Bentley, Lance, Bill Henson, Lee Ryder, Eric Hanson, Jeremy Penn, Travis Wade, *Paddy O'Brian*, Josh Weston, Tom Brock, Cameron Fox, Derek Cameron, Kevin Williams, Ty Colt
22:0622:06, 2 November 2012diffhist+38
Economy of South Korea
→Recent years: What are the sources for the data and conclusions in these paragraphs? If it’s the same source as for the 1st paragraph, that should be cited again. “Blanket citations” are not accepted scholarly practice.
16:4916:49, 14 October 2012diffhist+13
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United States Consumer Price Index
Added “and services” to “wide array of products” in 2nd sentence. “Products” is often (perhaps even usually) taken to mean only physical goods; adding “services” makes this summary more complete & unambiguous.
17:1317:13, 2 October 2012diffhist+1
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Repurchase agreement
ce: inserted comma between “loan” & “while” in last sentence for strict grammatical correctness & for consistency with use in preceding sentence.
22:3522:35, 1 September 2011diffhist+206
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Utility
Corrected wiki syntax error that caused previous attempt to add Georgescu-Roegen to "Further reading" to render incorrectly
22:2122:21, 1 September 2011diffhist−207
Utility
Undid revision 447932264 by
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talk)"Further reading" section previewed correctly but didn't render properly when saved (was mixed in with "References")