A user with 56 edits. Account created on 13 April 2006.
20 November 2015
- 08:29 08:29, 20 November 2015 diff hist +116 Perestroika →Education after perestroika: Noted unsourced assertions. Most of this section is problematic and may be propoganda. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
17 January 2011
- 11:25 11:25, 17 January 2011 diff hist +1 m Irrelevant conclusion →Example: inserted comma before parenthetical direct address. ~~~~
- 08:08 08:08, 17 January 2011 diff hist +15 The Adolescent replaced the "and his wife" with "and Larissa Volokhonsky" in 1st para: demoting her to nameless spouse is sexist and emphasizes only the male partner's contribution
9 January 2011
- 20:31 20:31, 9 January 2011 diff hist −20 m The Ambassadors →Literary significance & criticism: minor edit for readability in para 4; superfluous & convoluted wording deleted ("moreover," repet'n of author's name). ~~~~
29 December 2010
- 21:35 21:35, 29 December 2010 diff hist +3 m Karachi →History: added "of" in 2nd-to-last sentence in 3rd para betw/"cosmopolitan mix" and "different nationalities." Grammar fix. ~~~~
12 August 2010
- 05:25 05:25, 12 August 2010 diff hist +4 Kenmore Appliances added internal link to page on LG Corp. ~~~~
4 August 2010
- 15:11 15:11, 4 August 2010 diff hist −1 m Slavic languages →Branches: comma splice deleted in 2nd prose para. ~~~~
27 February 2010
- 09:29 09:29, 27 February 2010 diff hist +2 m Dave Eggers →Literary work: intended link to article The Paris Review completed. ~~~~
26 February 2010
- 00:31 00:31, 26 February 2010 diff hist −3 m Martin Amis →2010's: cleanup: comma inserted para 1; spelling of "protracted" corrected para 5; unnec. "very" removed from para 9; unnec. and gramm. confusing "exclusions" removed from para 12. ~~~~
- 00:11 00:11, 26 February 2010 diff hist +4 m Don DeLillo →Novels of the 2000s: link to article inserted at "Liu Xiaobo." ~~~~
- 00:04 00:04, 26 February 2010 diff hist −3 m Don DeLillo →Biography: cleanup for ease of reading. ~~~~
8 March 2009
- 19:19 19:19, 8 March 2009 diff hist −147 m Tau Ceti →SETI and HabCat: cleanup of added footnotes in comment on TPF mission's current postponement (2006-9, so far). ~~~~
- 19:17 19:17, 8 March 2009 diff hist +590 Tau Ceti →SETI and HabCat: Note on TPF mission's near-cancellation appended.
- 05:42 05:42, 8 March 2009 diff hist −156 User:Grammargeek No edit summary current
5 March 2009
- 23:13 23:13, 5 March 2009 diff hist +2 m Trans-Neptunian object →Notable trans-Neptunian objects: fmt rearranged caption wdg on linked TNO image to remove implication that Earth is a TNO. ~~~~
- 16:33 16:33, 5 March 2009 diff hist 0 m Epsilon Eridani →Planets: correction: auth of 1964 Habitable Planets for Man was Stephen H. Dole (not Stephen R.). ~~~~
- 16:16 16:16, 5 March 2009 diff hist −2 m Epsilon Indi →Characteristics: fmt for readability: 3rd thru 5th sentences combines to maintain subject focus on Epsilon Indi. ~~~~
- 15:40 15:40, 5 March 2009 diff hist +1 m Gustav Klimt →Vienna secession years: fm in 2nd sentence, possessive apostrophe added in phrase "best foreign artists works to Vienna" as appropr. ~~~~
8 May 2008
- 02:29 02:29, 8 May 2008 diff hist +160 Samuel Noah Kramer Simplified references; inserted necessary citation for "Biography" para. 5. ~~~~
- 02:25 02:25, 8 May 2008 diff hist +318 Samuel Noah Kramer Reinstated quote after finding reference for para. 3 of "Biography" section. ~~~~
- 02:22 02:22, 8 May 2008 diff hist −35 Samuel Noah Kramer deleted unnecessary first "then" in third paragraph of "Biography" (prev. "He then enrolled at Dropsie....") ~~~~
- 02:11 02:11, 8 May 2008 diff hist +288 Samuel Noah Kramer Inserted footnoted, Google Books-sourced reference for para. 3 quote fr Kramer's autobiography. ~~~~
3 October 2007
- 20:39 20:39, 3 October 2007 diff hist +1 m Jubaland c/e: "was a ephemeral state" corrected to "was an ephemeral state." ~~~~
11 September 2007
- 21:50 21:50, 11 September 2007 diff hist +7 m Planetary habitability →Alternative star systems: c/e: confusing phrase at end of section, "whereby Gliese 581," changed to simpler "and its star...." ~~~~
10 September 2007
- 19:57 19:57, 10 September 2007 diff hist +18 m Brussels →Belgium: c/e: "greater Brussels is the capital cannot be defended" replaced by "being represented as... " for clarity of meaning & grammatical accuracy.
- 19:55 19:55, 10 September 2007 diff hist +4 m Beijing c/e: link to Shanghai added in second descriptive paragraph where referenced in parallel to Hong Kong
- 19:51 19:51, 10 September 2007 diff hist +5 m Conurbation c/e: "an appropriate example" in ref to the Randstad, 3rd para, changed to "another appropriate..." since one supposedly appropriate example in SF has already been given.
- 19:50 19:50, 10 September 2007 diff hist +2 m Conurbation c/e: nonessential phrase in last sentence of 2nd para set off by "which" has been placed between commas
25 August 2007
- 23:22 23:22, 25 August 2007 diff hist +8 m Oannes c/e: incorrect use of "i.e." in 3rd para replaced by correct and more understandable "similarly to." ~~~~
- 22:16 22:16, 25 August 2007 diff hist +2 m Lilith →Mesopotamian Lilitu: Two instances of the term "incubus" mistakenly used for female demons replaced by the correct term, "succubus."~~~~
16 July 2007
- 05:31 05:31, 16 July 2007 diff hist −1 m G-8 (character) c/e: unnecessary comma in second paragraph ("and the tall and muscular, but superstitious") excised. ~~~~
12 July 2007
- 20:16 20:16, 12 July 2007 diff hist +1 m Fictional universe corrected spelling of "fiction" in second paragraph. ~~~~
16 June 2007
- 22:52 22:52, 16 June 2007 diff hist 0 m Montgomery, Alabama →History: Second clause of third sentence rearranged to place modifying clause "who would lay..." nearer its subject. ~~~~
- 22:51 22:51, 16 June 2007 diff hist +161 Montgomery, Alabama →History: Primarily formatting improvement for readability in the "History" section. Links added to Richmond, VA and Maxwell AFB. Some changes to wording made. ~~~~
14 June 2007
- 00:15 00:15, 14 June 2007 diff hist −15 m North Carolina →Film and the arts: c/e: Last two sentences combined for readability. ~~~~
13 June 2007
- 23:05 23:05, 13 June 2007 diff hist +1 m Riverside, California →Sister cities: c/e vandalism (previously "the city of slutside has an economic partnership..."). ~~~~
- 22:50 22:50, 13 June 2007 diff hist +1 Riverside, California →Landmarks: c/e comma inserted between "took place" and "but which" in first sentence. ~~~~
- 22:49 22:49, 13 June 2007 diff hist +3 m Riverside, California →Landmarks: c/e: arrangement of "and the Fox Theater...." changed for readability; spelling of "dilapidated" corrected. "Tall" moved outside parentheses in 2nd para. ~~~~
4 March 2007
- 08:32 08:32, 4 March 2007 diff hist +236 Talk:Milan Kundera →czech
18 February 2007
- 22:52 22:52, 18 February 2007 diff hist 0 m Golf c/e: changed first parenthetical in para. 2 to lowercase the word "Todays," added the possessive apostrophe, and removed the unnecessary fullstop. ~~~~
28 December 2006
- 03:08 03:08, 28 December 2006 diff hist −1 m Pentito c/e: changed "former members of the Sicilian Mafia that have abandoned" in the first para to "who have abandoned." ~~~~
26 December 2006
22 July 2006
- 00:34 00:34, 22 July 2006 diff hist 0 Paris →Entertainment: cl: corrected spelling on the word "highly" --~~~~
18 July 2006
- 00:14 00:14, 18 July 2006 diff hist −5 m Tap and flap consonants →Alveolar flaps: cl replaced "for it [Spanish] contrasts it with," with "contrasting it with..." for clarity's sake. ~~
- 00:12 00:12, 18 July 2006 diff hist +5 Tap and flap consonants →Alveolar flaps: cl: Replaced "Spanish is a good example" with "Spanish features...," since the entire Spanish language is not a single example of an alveolar flap--that would be absurd. ~~~~
27 June 2006
- 22:53 22:53, 27 June 2006 diff hist −2 m Race (human categorization) →Race in Brazil: cl last sentence edited: "Brazilian's myth" changed to "the Brazilian myth"; "as did sociologist G.F. demonstrated in" to "as sociologist G.F. demonstrated in...."
23 June 2006
- 22:02 22:02, 23 June 2006 diff hist 0 m The Rifleman cl "NBA-player" changed to "NBA player" for grammar's sake, amen.
20 June 2006
- 02:01 02:01, 20 June 2006 diff hist +1,511 Talk:Eusociality conflicting descriptions of eusociality?
14 June 2006
- 01:44 01:44, 14 June 2006 diff hist +562 N User:Grammargeek No edit summary
- 01:39 01:39, 14 June 2006 diff hist +660 Talk:Stephen Hawking minor edit, 2006 June 13, 3:45P.M. PST
