20:0720:07, 1 June 2024diffhist−100
Dorothy Otnow Lewis
→Education and personal life: Removed unsourced ~'remains dedicated to her cause in spite of many years of serious health problems' because the "dedicated to her cause" is a loaded way of saying she is still working and promoting her ideas as described in sourced portions elsewhere, while the health claims are not sourced at all. Readers will likely note she continues to work in spite of her age and the commonly associated infirmities.currentTags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
01:2101:21, 16 July 2023diffhist+1,571
China Eastern Airlines Flight 583
Added incident description/report findings and link to report. Could use cleanup but article had been missing this key information.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
25 June 2023
23:5823:58, 25 June 2023diffhist−2,160
Hazmat diving
→Health monitoring and screening of personnel: Removed completely generic definitions of health screening & monitoring which belong in their own articles, not here. Section did not in any way refer to diving, including no mention at all of the role of screening & monitoring in diving. It was just strange filler content. I left the section and marked it as blank to match other sections of article.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
18:0418:04, 16 July 2022diffhist+328
Caliber (artillery)
→Barrel length: replaced incomplete citation "{{sfn|Rowland, B|Boyd, WB|1953|GPO}}" with likely full citation. Picked latest revision on Google books since cite had no page numbers. This edition has additional author, Chin, but otherwise matches.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
17:4417:44, 26 May 2022diffhist−62
Huolongjing
→Contents: Removed unsourced comment about exocet missile. The incredible advances stand on their own. [Add too much of this stuff and you risk the article reading like articles on German WWII experimental aircraft after fan boys were allowed to edit unchecked.]Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
17:2217:22, 26 May 2022diffhist+3
Type U 139 submarine
→Description: The earlier type 151 was initially designed for war service as blockade runners, just not combat. Changed sentence to reflect this.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
18:1018:10, 25 February 2022diffhist+64
Pino Palladino
→Discography: Added 1985 Dream Academy session work. I remember hearing this when it first came out and immediately looking to see who played the fretless.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
18:4618:46, 13 December 2020diffhist+24
Samuel J. Tilden
Changed somewhat ambiguous "majority" & "outright majority" to "plurality" & "absolute majority". Added link to pluralityTags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
19:0019:00, 27 November 2019diffhist−1,318
Mil Mi-28
→Origins: Removed unsourced claim of 370mph model. (ref provided offered only unsourced claim that other, unnamed sources had made the implausible statements). Also, physics.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
16:2016:20, 1 October 2019diffhist−12
Assassination of Reinhard Heydrich
Minor wording change: "efficient" does not appear in the source document. They killed him because he was a Nazi invader, and because he was particularly brutal, not because his rule was brutally efficient.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
05:1505:15, 19 August 2019diffhist+26
List of Playboy Playmates of 1978
→July: Source does not state death was connected to complications from SJS, only that it caused blindness. Other google results suggest it was cause, but closer reading showed they were trying to sell class action legal services and did not actually state the connection. May well have been cause, just check any source.Tags: Mobile editMobile web edit