17:2417:24, 17 July 2024diffhist−45
Crucible Theatre
→History: we don't need to redundantly say the subject of the pictures is the topic of this article (it would merit mention only if it wasn't), and we don't need to say that an image is an image
11:3811:38, 17 July 2024diffhist+367
Frank Gambale
→Technique: MOS:blockquote - large quotations take block quotes. THe article made no mention of where this massive quote came from (it's not from the Guitar Player ref) - I had to google to find it on his Facebook. Readers should not have to "just google it" to be sure what is written in Wikipedia is accurate and verifiable.
09:1809:18, 17 July 2024diffhist0
Inheaven
→top: unless the sentence is very complicated, or some specific fact is so unclear or controversial that the reference specifically for it has to be right beside it, it's generally perfectly fine for the reference to be at the end of the sentencecurrent
21:1721:17, 16 July 2024diffhist0
Thai Canal
→Rationale: per MOS:NUMLIST, a number list is appropriate only if the order, or the numbers themselves, is significant - absent that, a bulletlist is more appropriate. Sentences end with full stops.current
20:1320:13, 16 July 2024diffhist+1
Chris Zoricich
→Club career: ce. The minutiae of the club's location isn't relevant to this article, and is pointlessly confusing (few readers will understand that "In East London" means "at Layton Orient"). Link and capitalise
Home Office, which is a proper noun. Where is the reference that supports this claim?
20:0920:09, 16 July 2024diffhist+332
Chris Zoricich
MOS:SURNAME - refer to people by their surname, not given name, not nickname. The nickname belongs in the intro, if it is sourced, which it was not. Add NZHerald which supports nickname.