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Draft:Kidnapping and Assassination of Chester Bitterman
In response to a message from 48JCL I have made major revisions to ensure a more formal, academic tone, I’ve gone through carefully to remove any private opinions or appeals to emotion (or even the hint thereof), I’ve enhanced the context section, changed any language which could be interpreted as embellishments, revised the Lead section, identified to the reader any contentious or controversial issues, eliminated untranslated Spanish terms, as well as provocative or colloquial language.Tag: Visual edit